Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Jan 26, 2006.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member


    another off beat..waiting for frank opinion

    neighbours were eloquent in praise
    culprits handcuffed by the police on time

    shouting at the top of the world
    with candy laced talk social agents
    gathered around our home with tv cameras
    to pacify grievances

    mom stone faced and saddened with untold grief
    dad was polite to answer the barrage of questions rubbing salt on his pain

    matured people couldnot understand
    what i was trying to express through my sign language
    my anger,my sorrow....
    some of them smiling on me sheepishly
    felt as amazing antics by those surrounding me as celebrity

    a day before
    saw my pregnant sister being raped and butchered...
    deaf and dumb above all handicapped and wheel chair....

  2. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    dude....for the love of god, i hope that this never happend to you or anyone.....
    this is sad man....left me feeling holllow and numb:(
  3. #iR@


    WOWWWWWW!!!!!!! :shock:
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    cheeeee this is sick(for what u ment)....... very well expressed(4 what u wrote) ..
  5. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Such morbid themes, dont go well with me...i'm sorry...
  6. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    That was extremely sad........HOPEFULLY, this hadn't happened to anyone.....really really, all these IGT poets and poetesses are making me soo emotional nowadays with their poems..... :Worried: :Worried: :cry1: :cry1: :cry2: :cry2:

    nice poem though dude..... :beer:
  7. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    i ask myself.. why i reply to ur every poem... i got the answer...
    coz u write too much about the thing that i hate.. called 'pain'..
    n apposits attracts... lol.. ;)
    this poem left me feeling numb... u have no right to do something like that to any1..!
    wel... take it as a compliment..
    may be.. thats the power of ur poem...
  8. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    It was far too "in my face" for me to like it.

    You do raise a very important issue though...even in India, the media literally feeds off other people's sadness. Even where someone has died, you'll find a camera in the room of the grieving capturing their sorrow and a million families all around the country going "awww" which sickens me since the mourners would probably appreciate the privacy of grief rather than the 2 minute sympathy of a thousand.

    Even on "reality TV shows", the in-thing, you'll find the audience virtually hoping to see the sad scenes behind the cameras where the entrant reacts to a defeat....or the masala of a battle of words, not unlike the streets where you'll find a circle of onlookers for every argument.
  9. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    @ dr saurabh,d_ist_urb_ed......freedom of expression and conclusion is appreciated in whatever form u said..........dont take it to heart..its just thought came to paper

    @#ir,guitarangela,maduresh......your comments are very thoughtful..even the theme makes you feel somewhat gloomy.

    @nimishaa.....u steal the words from my mouth.....well said....

    thanks to all for giving me comments

  10. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    i am now officially disturbed:
    :shock: hopefully this didn't happen to u>>
    it's soo saaad:sadbye:
  11. ElysiaN

    ElysiaN d@Rk\/\/@|\|deReR

    have not seen too many people writing clearly on such things.....nicely expressed....!!!

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