expectation...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Feb 17, 2006.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    hi..

    any comments plz go ahead...



    every micro second..
    i have survived from my break up...
    for this day...
    to finally able to comeout to those depressive days
    sobbing in pillow and unable to concentrate....


    my depression is on hold...
    my insanity ,my virtue..all standstill
    waiting for the today....


    another mile stone or cursed destiny
    unable to keep the things
    turning volatile and negative...
    cannot control my mood
    calm.....
    expectations are very fragile now..

    what if i will not be able to pull up...
    what will happen if i bring doom to my family...
    if dreams will be shattered....
    what will have the options..the next big step.......

    thoughts getting more bleak...
    dark clouds enveloping my attitude ...
    how can i cope up so much of depression.....
    so hard to survive till now....


    blank mind just unable to expect if some positive comes out...?
    for me..its just end of road.....
    no turn.....blocked step for future...


    wish someone can feel my pulse...
    wish i cud change the situation..
    wish if there is no word like success and failure...
    my life revolves so much around this two words..
    strangulating my breath...and my hopes
    till
    the things comeout of the dark tunnel.....


    i am seeing the dawn but thorugh dark glasses..
    unable to take out the glasses..till
    sunrise brings new achievement in my life..
    then i will decide....
    the path of glory or path of ultimate doom.....


    so much of uneasiness..almighty
    its like labour pain.....

    the word....expectation......



    rohit
    astroguru26
     
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  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    very well said ...their is no last time..no end to bouts ....win then defend..otherwise agin someone new comes and says "Darr Gaya Kyaa ?"
    Bahut pehle ek thought for the day likha tha.... 4 all my great friends of college...................."We mortals reach immortality only if we mortify"......................
     
  3. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    really nice...i liked your imagination...
     
  4. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    very true...its hard to cope up with everyone's expectations,...we cant keep everyone happy...

    reps!!:)
     
  5. Broken_heart

    Broken_heart New Member

    Good one!..Must say pretty deep
     
  6. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Nice one buddy...
    But as u can read my sig.. "Expectations leads to disappointments" ;)
    Its always true..
    Keep it up

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  7. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    Very true...

    Nice poem there Rohit ....
     
  8. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    My comments.

    Hi Rohit aka astroguru......i can really identify the emotions in ur words.It seems u are talking to urself and trying to convince ur heart abt somethng.
    Expectation at point or other lead to disappointment but its a positive energy that leads to many positive things.

    gud work.
     
  9. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    thanks to all ....and encouraging me with your comments

    rohit
     
  10. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    Rohit. You are in ME. YOU have written about my PRESENT SITUATION and WHAT IS CURRENTLY GOING ON IN MY MIND.
    And believe me, these thoughts are more electrifying when it comes to WHAT'S NEXT???..I became numb for a moment...words are not to my reach to describe my position now...and this poem has given me a sort of insight into myself...thanks a lot...but i am yet to find a solution.

    will not comment on errors on the poem cos, if i had written such a poem, it wouldnt have bee much better than this...lest, it would be as good as this.

    Regards
    Sharmontime[TM]:cool:
     
  11. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

  12. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    late to see this one...but a good poetry..
    descriptive power in you is appreciable..
     

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