hi.. any comments plz go ahead... every micro second.. i have survived from my break up... for this day... to finally able to comeout to those depressive days sobbing in pillow and unable to concentrate.... my depression is on hold... my insanity ,my virtue..all standstill waiting for the today.... another mile stone or cursed destiny unable to keep the things turning volatile and negative... cannot control my mood calm..... expectations are very fragile now.. what if i will not be able to pull up... what will happen if i bring doom to my family... if dreams will be shattered.... what will have the options..the next big step....... thoughts getting more bleak... dark clouds enveloping my attitude ... how can i cope up so much of depression..... so hard to survive till now.... blank mind just unable to expect if some positive comes out...? for me..its just end of road..... no turn.....blocked step for future... wish someone can feel my pulse... wish i cud change the situation.. wish if there is no word like success and failure... my life revolves so much around this two words.. strangulating my breath...and my hopes till the things comeout of the dark tunnel..... i am seeing the dawn but thorugh dark glasses.. unable to take out the glasses..till sunrise brings new achievement in my life.. then i will decide.... the path of glory or path of ultimate doom..... so much of uneasiness..almighty its like labour pain..... the word....expectation...... rohit astroguru26
very well said ...their is no last time..no end to bouts ....win then defend..otherwise agin someone new comes and says "Darr Gaya Kyaa ?" Bahut pehle ek thought for the day likha tha.... 4 all my great friends of college...................."We mortals reach immortality only if we mortify"......................
very true...its hard to cope up with everyone's expectations,...we cant keep everyone happy... reps!!
Nice one buddy... But as u can read my sig.. "Expectations leads to disappointments" Its always true.. Keep it up REgards, Zooom..!!
My comments. Hi Rohit aka astroguru......i can really identify the emotions in ur words.It seems u are talking to urself and trying to convince ur heart abt somethng. Expectation at point or other lead to disappointment but its a positive energy that leads to many positive things. gud work.
Rohit. You are in ME. YOU have written about my PRESENT SITUATION and WHAT IS CURRENTLY GOING ON IN MY MIND. And believe me, these thoughts are more electrifying when it comes to WHAT'S NEXT???..I became numb for a moment...words are not to my reach to describe my position now...and this poem has given me a sort of insight into myself...thanks a lot...but i am yet to find a solution. will not comment on errors on the poem cos, if i had written such a poem, it wouldnt have bee much better than this...lest, it would be as good as this. Regards Sharmontime[TM]