Even game life is a game, which you gotta play theres no respect, for what you say life is a gamble, on which you bet theres no profit every other day i am no stranger to victory here each and every day, is not your day roll the dice, pray for your luck, you cant be lucky , eacfh and every day you trun back, u cry for yesterday when u look ahead, hope for a better day i am here to see, your hope doesnt come true time and time , to win over you Theres no way, you get rid of me theres no way, ill let you go u hafta pay up, for what youve done i pay up, for what ive got my victory is your defeat here your victory is my defeat here no one wants to lose the game its better if you lose the game
The concept is good, but you are changing the rhyming scheme for every stanza... that slightly disturbs the rythm the poem... Just a small piece of advice from me.
