End of True Love

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by skaw, May 23, 2005.

  1. skaw

    skaw snooze

    it was just another day when i first talked to you
    everything thing seamed normal, should've been the same for you
    we talked as two strangers meeting on a rainy day
    and in the end, with no hesitation i said by to you

    i never knew we would ever become friends
    i never knew you would ever become my strength
    as a lost boy, i talked to you every day
    even when we didn't have nothing to talk about
    we gave each other those silent stares
    i wish time had stopped then
    but no cruel times were hiding behind each glare
    so we became friends
    even though the you live in a city so far
    maybe it was just meant

    it unconciously hurted me to know how your love treated you
    yet i pretend i didn't care an inch for you
    in the end you broke free from that guy
    and you landed in my arms as broke as one could be

    you liked to share your pain with me
    i didn't think, and just acted as a friend to you
    and unconciously you were being attracted to me
    and at the same time, i was falling in love with you

    we grew closer and closer
    close enough to love each other
    and one day you said something
    that took my vocabulary away and made me stutter

    November 29, 2004
    i heard 3 words that made me drop to the floor
    i was excited and scared
    soo much happiness landed on me in just one moment

    we were a couple then
    the best ones there could be
    you were a pari
    an angel that flew down only for me

    with you there, no sadness could make me sad
    with you there, no moment could be bad
    with you there, i wouldn't ever get mad
    with you there, nothing could be bad

    you calmed me down when i was mad
    you made me smile if i was sad
    you made my days better if they were bad
    yet you were always hurt cause of your dad

    i always was there for you
    i always had my arms open for you
    i only came the distance for you
    but i didn't know what was hidden inside you

    then one day you told me something
    that brought me on the floor
    i thought you were over your first love
    but i was as wrong as one could be
    i was as hurt as one could be
    in a moment it was all taken away from me
    my strength, my weakness, my smiles and my cries
    i felt as if i was dying without a reason
    but damn it, i was living in the moment
    damn it, I couldn’t die for a moment

    then our relationship broke down
    it wasn’t only that, even I broke down
    It couldn’t be, but even you broke down
    It was all very sad, just as in a story of a dead

    From that day on, I hate the word love
    All it ever does, it give you smiles for a while
    And then its just tragic sadness for each one
    Only if the time stopped when we were together, just for a while

    So I say, never fall in true love
    It will only make you sad, when ‘tis done
    So why fall for an evil like such
    I’ll live myself, alone, hoping for some luck
    BubblyMartini and cYpHeR like this.
  2. skaw

    skaw snooze

    lol its a story .. so it can be long !!
  3. sunny88896

    sunny88896 New Member

    cool man it was awesome work ...................................................................

    were you in love whe you write it down and given it to your girlfriend
  4. skaw

    skaw snooze

    you guys culdve atleast said that it suked .. wuldve been better than not saying anything at all
  5. itsme_amit

    itsme_amit New Member

    hey i usually dont get time to surf....
    but whenevr i get i read all the stuff....
    and beleive me u vere terrific....
    hats off to u....
    simply superb poem....
    i can understand as this poem reminds something of my past...
    infact the dates are also clashing...
    keep up the gud work..
    keeep riting :shock: :annoyed: :think:
  6. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    dude i feel for u..........but dont give up yet...............
    heartfelt man.......reps for u..........good one............
  7. Nanda

    Nanda Bassist

    hey read a bit of it...... its too long dude.... the stuff i read was gud.... Maybe when i have time i'll read it full
  8. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    great but very long one.good luck to you man!!!!!!1
  9. death angel

    death angel the messenger from hell

    Is this real....
  10. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    nice one dude...keep it up...reps..
    rocking_devil likes this.
  11. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    fav part: "So I say, never fall in true love
    It will only make you sad, when ‘tis done
    So why fall for an evil like such
    I’ll live myself, alone, hoping for some luck"

    ur good..nearly made me gulp a lump.. :shock:
  12. skaw

    skaw snooze

    thanx for replying .. :eek:: and its soo long :shock: .. lol i didn't even noe it was that long .. :Worried:
  13. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    One can never put a stop to words when they start flowing....
    its the right way to write ur heart out:)

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