it was just another day when i first talked to you everything thing seamed normal, should've been the same for you we talked as two strangers meeting on a rainy day and in the end, with no hesitation i said by to you i never knew we would ever become friends i never knew you would ever become my strength as a lost boy, i talked to you every day even when we didn't have nothing to talk about we gave each other those silent stares i wish time had stopped then but no cruel times were hiding behind each glare so we became friends even though the you live in a city so far maybe it was just meant it unconciously hurted me to know how your love treated you yet i pretend i didn't care an inch for you in the end you broke free from that guy and you landed in my arms as broke as one could be you liked to share your pain with me i didn't think, and just acted as a friend to you and unconciously you were being attracted to me and at the same time, i was falling in love with you we grew closer and closer close enough to love each other and one day you said something that took my vocabulary away and made me stutter November 29, 2004 i heard 3 words that made me drop to the floor i was excited and scared soo much happiness landed on me in just one moment we were a couple then the best ones there could be you were a pari an angel that flew down only for me with you there, no sadness could make me sad with you there, no moment could be bad with you there, i wouldn't ever get mad with you there, nothing could be bad you calmed me down when i was mad you made me smile if i was sad you made my days better if they were bad yet you were always hurt cause of your dad i always was there for you i always had my arms open for you i only came the distance for you but i didn't know what was hidden inside you then one day you told me something that brought me on the floor i thought you were over your first love but i was as wrong as one could be i was as hurt as one could be in a moment it was all taken away from me my strength, my weakness, my smiles and my cries i felt as if i was dying without a reason but damn it, i was living in the moment damn it, I couldn’t die for a moment then our relationship broke down it wasn’t only that, even I broke down It couldn’t be, but even you broke down It was all very sad, just as in a story of a dead From that day on, I hate the word love All it ever does, it give you smiles for a while And then its just tragic sadness for each one Only if the time stopped when we were together, just for a while So I say, never fall in true love It will only make you sad, when ‘tis done So why fall for an evil like such I’ll live myself, alone, hoping for some luck
cool man it was awesome work ................................................................... were you in love whe you write it down and given it to your girlfriend
.... hey i usually dont get time to surf.... but whenevr i get i read all the stuff.... and beleive me u vere terrific.... hats off to u.... simply superb poem.... i can understand as this poem reminds something of my past... infact the dates are also clashing... keep up the gud work.. keeep riting :shock: :annoyed: :think:
dude i feel for u..........but dont give up yet............... heartfelt man.......reps for u..........good one............
hey read a bit of it...... its too long dude.... the stuff i read was gud.... Maybe when i have time i'll read it full
fav part: "So I say, never fall in true love It will only make you sad, when ‘tis done So why fall for an evil like such I’ll live myself, alone, hoping for some luck" ur good..nearly made me gulp a lump.. :shock:
thanx for replying .. : and its soo long :shock: .. lol i didn't even noe it was that long .. :Worried:
One can never put a stop to words when they start flowing.... its the right way to write ur heart out