Embrace me Embrace me, with your arms wide open into the darkness that is within you Embrace me with your eyes so cold into the light aborning Embrace me, i know its an inevitability for every soul enters that realm Embrace me, i hear the requiem but a meloncholy note never halted you Embrace me, let me hold on to your hands guide me into that other world Embrace me, for am a child a child that beckons your touch Embrace me, shield me from the ether bleed the misery that doth besiege me Embrace me, dark angel vortices of your wings let me feel Embrace me, oh might force under your power let me yield. Embrace me, fortuity a new day beyond you awaits me. © 2005 Dr.Saurabh Rahurkar
believe you me, this is nothing about nickoledeon ( screw the spelling ) i was wondering how many wud really get what that is about:
To me it carries multiple messages. I was trying to find something that would eliminate one of the few that I found but couldn't. My first instinct said that this was about death. It is quite obvious from what I read about entering an unknown realm...however, on a second read I found that it could just as easily be about birth where you are entering the realm of life. Birth is as inevitable as death when it comes to existence. Another way to look at this would be that this is about drugs...hence, the lines about shielding you from the misery. Also the new day that might await you beyond "you" might indicate the time when you once again regain control of your senses. I love ambiguity in a piece and this was no exception. Well written, dude.
Nice poem dear but embracing death should be coming from someone "else".. donno what to say but its good um..sounds a bit Shakespearean... epecially coz of the use of archaic words
daktur... i never knew u were into poetry also.. ok iL be very honest now...i read ur poem thrice..and im saving it on my disk..can i? : and most of all.. its one of the best poems i have ever read...i wanna rep u as my token of appreciation trust me...u dont need any "critic" now..as v were talking about..ur work is impeccable...amazing! :grin: :grin:
Good poem daktur. Really liked it. I like abstract pieces such as this. The too direct ones always bore me. Good work. I'd like to read more of your work.
woah.....back after a long time.... @Vini..u flatter me...of course u can save it.......:grin: @all thanx...... but its wierd......the no. of replies aint proportional to the number of views
woah 96 views that means ur poem left prople spellbound and dumbstruck..they had nothing to say but just logged out in utter disbelief that our very own daakturr can make such bootiful poems : too much now??
Hello Dr. Saurabh, Nice to read your poem. I would be waiting to read more of your poems. Good work. Thanks. Keep shining & keep smiling.
