Embrace me

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by DrSaurabh, Sep 22, 2005.

  1. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    Embrace me

    Embrace me, with your arms wide open
    into the darkness that is within you
    Embrace me with your eyes so cold
    into the light aborning

    Embrace me, i know its an inevitability
    for every soul enters that realm
    Embrace me, i hear the requiem
    but a meloncholy note never halted you

    Embrace me, let me hold on to your hands
    guide me into that other world
    Embrace me, for am a child
    a child that beckons your touch

    Embrace me, shield me from the ether
    bleed the misery that doth besiege me
    Embrace me, dark angel
    vortices of your wings let me feel

    Embrace me, oh might force
    under your power let me yield.
    Embrace me, fortuity
    a new day beyond you awaits me.

    © 2005 Dr.Saurabh Rahurkar
  2. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    embrace me subjects to niklodeon!.....but anywyaz,,, the poem was kinda good!...
  3. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    believe you me, this is nothing about nickoledeon ( screw the spelling )
    i was wondering how many wud really get what that is about:eek::
  4. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    To me it carries multiple messages. I was trying to find something that would eliminate one of the few that I found but couldn't.

    My first instinct said that this was about death. It is quite obvious from what I read about entering an unknown realm...however, on a second read I found that it could just as easily be about birth where you are entering the realm of life. Birth is as inevitable as death when it comes to existence.

    Another way to look at this would be that this is about drugs...hence, the lines about shielding you from the misery. Also the new day that might await you beyond "you" might indicate the time when you once again regain control of your senses.

    I love ambiguity in a piece and this was no exception. Well written, dude.
  5. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    @bjr...i knew i could count on you...finally some one who got it ...( sorry RD )..now i feel good
  6. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Nice poem dear

    but embracing death should be coming from someone "else"..
    donno what to say but its good
    um..sounds a bit Shakespearean... epecially coz of the use of archaic words
  7. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    daktur... i never knew u were into poetry also.. ok iL be very honest now...i read ur poem thrice..and im saving it on my disk..can i? :p: and most of all.. its one of the best poems i have ever read...i wanna rep u as my token of appreciation :) trust me...u dont need any "critic" now..as v were talking about..ur work is impeccable...amazing! :grin: :grin:
  8. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    my pleasure, it felt good to read.

    bah, too few comments on this... :mad:
  9. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Excellent Poem man...!

    Keep it up!

  10. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Good poem daktur. Really liked it. I like abstract pieces such as this. The too direct ones always bore me. Good work. I'd like to read more of your work.
  11. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    woah.....back after a long time....:)
    @Vini..u flatter me...of course u can save it.......:grin:
    @all thanx......
    but its wierd......the no. of replies aint proportional to the number of views ;)
  12. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    woah 96 views

    that means ur poem left prople spellbound and dumbstruck..they had nothing to say but just logged out in utter disbelief that our very own daakturr can make such bootiful poems :p:

    too much now?? :)
  13. my brain is too small to understand this poem
  14. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    wow.. beautiful poem...

    (why did i not notice this before :annoyed: )
  15. #iR@


    very nice....... i find theres a hidden sort of a meaning in the poem.... anyway.. GOOD WORK! :)
  16. Seraph Or Human

    Seraph Or Human New Member

    Hello Dr. Saurabh,
    Nice to read your poem.
    I would be waiting to read more of your poems.
    Good work.
    Keep shining & keep smiling.

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