https://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=539236&songID=6713952 Tell me what you think especially about the vocals
The link is working now, i think something went wrong! Nice cover man, the guitaring is good and the vocals are good too. The Sur isn't bad, just some tiny faults at places, so the main thing too be improved is the feeling in your voice, you should give yourself fully while singing this song (actually every song). I don't want to say it isn't good, oh no man, you did a very good job but in my opinion these are the disadvantages, just try to sing with some more feeling and passion in your voice!!! Take care man and keep posting!
looks like in some places you were struggling to cling on to the chords..... some sur faults as keoraf said........ also a tip........when you're playing solo with the acoustic you should go mad after really getting into the song.......like jhonny cash used to........you should strum a lot harder in some places and pluck at some others........it should change.......what you did was very monotonous........just try adding some bling....... you own a good voice though........keep practicing......... cheers! :beer: