ek waar milaa de...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, Apr 7, 2006.

  1. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    my friend has asked me for some lyrics..
    theme was...a person when leaves his home..n goes to the otherworld for education or job.. he remembers his village, his loved ones n his friends..
    i tried my best to bring those emotions in the song...
    now its upto u to decide how it has been done..
    hope u all like it..n my friend as well.. so that he cud come wit beautiful composition for it..



    Ek waar milaa de..........

    mere yaar mujhe ek waar mila de..
    assi jidd na kar mere yaar mila de..
    zindagi ki kashti doob na jaave..
    meraa saahil meraa sansaar mila de..

    wohi sansaar jo tha meraa..
    mere apnon ka tha jahaa baseraa..
    baadlon ke peeche jahaa chaand rehta tha..
    suraj ki kirnon se jahaa hota tha saveraa..

    abb fans gayaa hu iss naye jahaan me..
    sochta hu kahaa aagayaa main..
    chand-suraj bhi ghadi ke gulaam..
    pyaar milta jahaa, paiso ki panaah me..

    thak gayaa hu iss akelepan se..
    na gal kar koi... dildaar milaa de.......... mere yaar mujhe ek waar milaa de..

    woh mandir ka diyaa, pawan sa ghar..
    maa ki god me rakha apna sar..
    titaliyon ke rang..panchiyon ke geet..
    khamoshi ki dhun, kuch sust dagar..

    yahaa tej hai raahein, aur shor hi shor..
    shor me gum hai, log chaaron aur..
    na mamta ka surat, na rabb ki murat..
    khud ke hi ghar me ban gaye hai chor..

    adhura reh gayaa hu iss adhure jahaan me...
    mujhe aaj meraa jahaan mila de.......... mere yaar mujhe ek waar mila de..

    yaad aati hai unki dilkash adaayein..
    hayaa ki chunar, pyaar ki baahein..
    saundhi saundhi khushbu, bhina bhina sa samaa..
    sargoshi karti, dhimi dhimi hawaayen..

    abb yaadein hai unki,bass aur kuch nahi..
    iss anjaane sheher me gum gayaa hu kahin..
    mausam band hai jin chaar diwaaron me..
    libaaj hayaa ka, utraa hai wohi..

    mere yaar nahi tadap saktaa hu main aur..
    rab di sohn mujhe mera pyaar milaa de.......... mere yaar mujhe ek waar milaa de



    comments plz:cool:
     
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ok one...........
     
  3. waz_wylde

    waz_wylde New Member

    thanx

    Hey sweety thanx for the lyrics.....it is really nice....the thibg i like that it reflects the feeling of leavin home place..
     
  4. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ya nice one nimi though pretty long...and change ths word fans to somethin....
     
  5. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Nice......

    But I think it wud be nice if it is composed in Lucky Ali style.....
     
  6. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    hey thanks all for replying,,,
    i know...u must have liked bhool aaye hai better than this..

    but i somehow feel..this poem has great potential to turn into a song..
    wit its simple words n smooth expression..

    bhool aaye hai..is good poetry but not great song...
    n waseem good luck to u... hope u compose it very beautifully..
     
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  7. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    what if we try to turn that into a song????

    ie seriously think someone here can give a try

    as usual good work nimisha :D:
     
  8. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    ^^^thanks bro...

    already waz_wylde have said..he will try to compose..
     
  9. arpi

    arpi New Member

    naaaaaaaah I like it alot...it has great potential for a song
     
  10. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    ^^thanks my dear little sis..
    btw.. where had u disappeared?
     
  11. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    arrrrrrrrr ye kahi EK BAAR AAJA AAJA AAJA se prabhavit to nahi or the famous music director wants lyrics.......himesh reshamiyaa ne agar doobara gaya to main bombay chala hi jaauun ga ;)
     

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