ek tukda meri shaayeri ka...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Sep 2, 2005.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Bohot shiddat thi us manzil ko pane ki
    Pass pahuche to ummeed sath chhod gai
    Bulaya tha usne to jana hi para is jaan ko
    Par jaate jaate bhi ye zindgi….
    Is duniya ke liye ek misaal chhod gayi
     
  2. shak

    shak Harrr!

    wah wah wah wah wah wah ...
    didnt understand a few words .. limited vocaulary u see ... but i certainly got the thump!
     
  3. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    god one garima ...

    hey shahrukh .. yaar that wah wah wah wah reminded me of beginer_lavina ... sh'e got a hbbit of doing that everynow n then ... LOL
     
  4. shak

    shak Harrr!

    well thats what u say when you like the shayari dunt you?
    hehe ... but yeah i know where ya comin from ...
    wah wah wah for lavina
    tahda for vini
    bugger for nanda
    .....
     
  5. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    yeah .. methinks i too need ta develop some quirk ... looks good on hte screen ;)
     
  6. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo


    Tell me which was an OHT....i mite help u understand the meaning of it...
     
  7. Ankitad

    Ankitad New Member

    Hey garima wat does "shiddat" mean ???
    Nice one yaar, keep it up.
     
  8. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    err...most of it went kinda bouncer.....u mind explainin sm of da difficult wrds
     
  9. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Good One Garima .. u r doing good.. but why don't u write sumthing on frndship..
     
  10. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :) So its a mixed response...for those who dint understand the meaning of some words i'll explain in simpler words. It goes like this...
    Bohot shiddat thi us manzil ko pane ki....shiddat means 'desire'/chahat...manzil here means an 'aim'
    pas pahuche to ummeed sath chhod gayi...jab manzil(aim) ke pas pahuche to jo ummeed thi ki us manzil ko shayad hum pa sake...woh bhi chali gai
    bulaya tha usne to jana hi para is jaan ko...bulaya tha usne means Bhagwan/God ne, to jana hi para is jaan ko matlab 'soul' ko...this line reflects 'death'...
    par jaate jaate bhi yeh zindagi...is duniya ke liye ek misaal chhod gai...this means that even when i was dying...the way i tried to achieve my aim/goal became an example for this world....
    this was the thinking behind this sher....i hope i made it a bit simple to understand now :)
     
  11. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    thanx a lot....tht was really nice...post some more
     
  12. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Thanx vishwa...& thanx for that nice suggestion..I wud definetly thnk of somethng on friendship.
    Abhi kuchh dimaag me nai aa raha hai .....jaam ho rakha hai.....but i'll definetly try to thnk of somethng
     
  13. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    try using Chameli ka Tel ...

    Govinda uses it ...
     
  14. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    nope he uses navratan tel...thanda thanda cool cool
     
  15. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    yeah ... but it has chameli ka tel in it ...

    naratan is branded product ...
    i just told the main ingedient ... :p:

    thanda thanda cool cool LMAO
     
  16. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^thanx for sharing some of ur 'beauty' secrets ssslayer
     
  17. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    anytime garima ...
    anytime ...

    u need to first admire my "beauty" .. b.t.w.
     
  18. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^looking frwd to some more ....Mr. Chameli ka tel (he he he)
     
  19. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

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    yeah pretty soon ... :grin: ... prettyy soon ...
     

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