Shayar khayalon ko lafzon main piron dete hai kuch nagme ban jate hai baki kagaz par reh jate hain Unke liye pyar ka mausam nahi hota koi shayar koi iska matlab puche iska haq nahi hota kabhi gum bharte hain ek-ek lafz main kabhi khushiya chalakti hain ek-ek lafz main phir bhi kabhi kabhi adhoori si lagti hain kuch alfaz baya nahi hote kuch paigaam diya nahi karte khayalon main rehne ki aadat si ho jati hai bina baat muskurane ki chahat si hoti hai har kisiko dil ki baat samjh nahi aati lekin shayaron ko dil ke sahi taar chedne ki fitrat si hoti hai hota hai har kisi main ik shayar sirf kalam thirakne ki zarurat hoti hai : Good or bad do gimme your views...
yep..very nice poem!! thanx for writing a poem on underpriviledged shayars...poor people write for everyone n everything..but no1 writes a poem on/for them :grin: specially liked this line>> kuch nagme ban jate hai baki kagaz par reh jate hain reps vrroomin ur way
i meant that was a chuckle when u realize something ... since "mai shayar to nahin", i didnt know about all this ... n now that u tell me ... it comes as a "divine revelation"
^^Greedy .......: ................ gud u made the thread alive again ..... wnder how i missed this good poem .... specially I liked the theme ...... writing about the 'Shayar' ....... another aspect is that u described so many things within those few lines ...... realy gud .....
Thanks Apu.. Tried my best to potray a Poet.. but jus couldnt find the right words... theres a lot more to a poet ..than u can see
well nthng outstanding abt this one...sorry to disappoint you. Normally ghazal has rhyming para....so try building on that.
Thanks Pamposh... i know : ... i kinda dont like reviving and rejuvenating things so didnt actually bother to redo this poem..
