Ek Nazm {Maa}

aaj mei pehli post kar rahi hoon aur umeed hai aap saab ko pasand aayegi..​

Maa aik aisa lafz hai jab bola jata hai to dono
honth aik doosre ko choom lete hain maa ke
baghair ghar aik kibristaan hai maa hai to sab
kuch hai agar maa nahi to kuch bhi nahi hai

maa ki kadar ais se poocho jis ki maa na ho..
maa aandhre ghar ka charaagh hai sab se
ziada taleem dene wali maa hai
Tum hi nai to sirf ais duniya main
Hamesha se mujh se pyaar kia hai

Yaad hai mujh ko bachpan ki yaadein
or tumahri kuch meethi meethi batein
kayi gadhi beet gayi kayi baras guzar ge
Magar yaad hai mujh ko aaj bhi woh din
jab tum ne mujh ko aik kalam pakdhya tha
Pehla lafz "maa" tu hi ne to likhna sikaya tha
Mujh ko duniya main jeene ka dang sikhaya hai

Main jab nakam hui khuwahishat natamam hui
Umeedein kat gayi or hasratein mit gayi
To nai hi mujh ko phir se mazboot banaya
mujh ko aik bar phir seeda rasta dikhaya
Magar aaj sirf tere liye kalam utha hai

Jis se tum ne mujhe likhna sikhaya hai
Main ne aaj apni muhabbat ka iqraar kia hai
haan maa! aaj yeh maine iqraar kia hai
Maa main tere azmat ko salam karti hoon
apni nazm ka bas yahi ikhtitam karti hoon...​

 

so touching....
u made me cry........!!

 

really moving..acha likha..good job sweetie..

 

app ki nazm kabile tariif hai.....i wanted to be the first to appriciate but will be the first to rep u.....

 

wow that was really nice and sweet

Ps-need reps to rep u:grin:

 

M---azing

With all these comments...do i need to say anythng........................outstanding.

 

Shukriya :nw: Nimisha iss nazm ko padhne ke liye..
haan yeh nazm hai hi aaisi jo dil ko chu jaye..

 

simply awesome.......!!!! :rock:

 

brilliant stuff reminding the power of mother...............


rohit
astroguru26

 

shukriya iss nazm ko pasand karne ke liye :nw:

app ki nazm kabile tariif hai.....i wanted to be the first to appriciate but will be the first to rep u....

Shukriya :nw: madhuresh and hoping to see you appreciate in my other posts first

wow that was really nice and sweet

Ps-need reps to rep u

Thanks UjSen :nw: glad you liked the post


With all these comments...do i need to say anythng........................outstanding.
Today 12:21 PM

Thank you :nw: Pamposh for appreciating and aap aaye humari post par yahi badi baat hai aapne aap mei

 

Thank you ElysiaN :nw:


Thanks Rohit :nw: Glad you liked it

 

ye nazm shabd ka arth kya hai..

krupaya hamaara marg darshan kijiye

 

Haanji bilkul ...
Nazm is a jingle..aur kuch jaana ho to hume zaroor poochye ga

 

........... (forget it )

 

thank you for appreciating :nw: ...

 

^^ kindly remove the quote thing.. !! @ sweetie

Thanks in advance

 

I have my dear but for some reason the site is too slow from here so taking time..sorry..

 

Mothers are the only ones in the world who take all the shit from us and yet return only sweets...
I m impressed by your effort to give "mothers" their due recognition.

 

:shock: :shock:

but when i read the poem i can say yes its really touching(but i did not cry : just remembered home a bit)

reps for u

 

hehe...what happened??

u afraid Varshita will start writing poems again :
or U dont want people to know about ur lighter side :think:


@sweetie..
badhiya nazm hai...aap ke liye reps (err....wtf is hindi for reps?)

jai mata di