Ek khayal....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Jun 6, 2006.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Not completely mine….lines highlighted were written by me.

    Samajh nahi aata, kyu aata hai yeh khayal mere dil mein
    Ehsaas toh hai mann me, par tu pas nahi is pal me.

    Kash, ki rahe pas yeh khayal
    Har pal base tu is dil mein
    Bhagwan ne chaha
    Toh tu zaroor hoga mere kal me


    Tera ehsaas pakar na jaane dil ko sambhaloon kaise
    Tu hi bata tujhe pakar, is zameen pe kadam jamau kaise

    Kash, ki tu hota mere pas
    Bata paate ki tumhe chahte hain kaise
    Dil yakeen karta hai
    Ki tum vaise hi ho, maine socha hai jaise…..



    :grin: ;)
     
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  2. khuram82

    khuram82 ......:mad:........

    nice work.......but if the non-bold lines weren't from you then who wrote them?...........reps for ur work ;)
     
  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ahem ahem....thanks for the rep :p:
     
  4. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Not very impressive.
    u can do much better.
     
  5. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    the intesion was not to write a poem...but it ended up being one.
     
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  6. Good one garima....bold lines are needed to be bold...amazing....reps for sure..;)
     
  7. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^Thank You Devilshly :grin:
     
  8. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    is somebody in love ???....ahem ahem.......hmm....all khayal and khayals.....
     
  9. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    amazing!!!! the lines u rote were better... honestly... much more deep! :) keep riting gurl!
     
  10. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    i wont say accha hai ..... na to app ki lines na gumnaam shayar ki hi...but may be meri samajh se bahar hai ;)
     
  11. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Abhi Thanks for reading :p:
    @Hira...Thanks alot gurl :):)
    @Madhuresh...kash aapki samajh ka area thoda increase ho :p: :p:...thanks anyway for reading....
     

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