Ek khayaal..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, Nov 18, 2006.

  1. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    its been like more than a month since i posted new thread here wit my poem..
    finally.. here is my recent creation.. hope u like it..!

    Dhundhle se khwabon ki kyu chuppi sehnaa..
    palkon ke parde me kyu gumsum rehnaa..

    samzo sharaarat hi sahi
    socho to bagaawat hi sahi
    zidd kaho ya, jeene ki chaahat hi sahi

    kyu wajood pe mere ho kisi aur ki hukumat
    ek khayaal ne socha, ke woh ban jaaye hakikat..

    bekhud se khud hone ki, ho jaaye ibaadat
    ek khayaal ne socha, ke woh ban jaaye hakikat..

    Khwabon se toda rishta, mila ashqon ka dariyaa..
    palkon ke aage thi koi, ajeeb si hi duniyaa..

    aankho ki hifaazat nahi
    sapnon ki nazaakat nahi
    wajood mila, par jaan salaamat nahi

    naa wafaa, naa mohabbat, na dil ki koi sharaafat
    ek khayaal pachtaaya, kyu ban gayaa woh hakikat..

    fir ban sake jo woh khayaal, bass itni si kinaayat
    ek khayaal pachtaaya, kyu ban gayaa woh hakikat

    thoughts n dreams r nothing but processes at the core of our mind, on which we have control.
    but when these dreams turn into reality(let it be good or bad), we have no control on it!
    bringing dreams into reality is not an easy thing, once u start working for it, u realise how much u have to pay for it, n finally the beautiful dream dont seem that beautiful anymore in the reality.. n u wish better it was just a dream!
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  2. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Great poem!I'm out of good adjectives...
    Really nice of you to give its summary too...nice one
    Hats off + reps
  3. luckyravi

    luckyravi New Member

    hey nimisha its realy nice, vry gd, i like ur poem, its like rain, we can never count rains drops, just like u wrote ths beautyful poem, its nt only pm its ur true feelings, m i right???????? bythwy i m lucky n like ur thered, keep it up
  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    didnt have to read the interpretation..quite clear to get nimmo darls..for me atleast :)

    hmm..nice poem and a nice thought
  5. vedder

    vedder New Member

    beautiful poem...your work is really good!..:)
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    accha hai par phir vahi shabdon ka sahi isstamaal nahi huaa...
    "thoughts n dreams r nothing but processes at the core of our mind, on which we have control"
    i dont agree to ur thought ...and nither have a definate notion abt the thing in my mind ... but my heart says "dreaming is living the way u want so dream"
  7. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e <3V/S<3 50 CeNt$

    i lykd thm 4 lines

    overall 8/10

    reps !
  8. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    thank you people for appreciation.
    n yeah, these r my true feelings.

    @madhuresh, im not talking bout any random thoughts in our mind. im talking bout dreams and objectives that we think in our mind..
    for example, it was my dream to step into perticular career field and excell in there, but now im so frustrated with all obstacles n corruption in there,i think, dreaming was really better than turning this into reality..
  9. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    oops aisa kyaa ..then i dont hv any thoughts... ye job professional life and all is stupid things rather to be taken sooo serious that u write poems abt it.. ibelive ye sab to bas karte jaana hai .. agar paisa kamana hai !:think:
  10. nimeetshah

    nimeetshah New Member

    Nimisha, I loved this poem to the core.... I am making a song out it... banaau na??

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