dying declaration...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Feb 4, 2006.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member


    waiting for your comments.......

    beautiful eyes and smile
    swept me off like anything
    wished our dreams never end
    poured my emotions.
    loved like never and before
    u were my whole world...
    with times
    we lost our identity became one

    one day....
    infidelity rocked me........
    saw your shamlessness
    on bed.....

    looked back thought you will come back as always
    u did not returned this time..

    numbess seized me
    i couldnot forgive myself for making your life like
    made you to hold other hand and leave me forever

    still i donot cry
    i wanted to cry infront of you
    plz forgive me...

    i came into this world crying......
    let me die with smile on my face.............

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  2. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Reminds of the quote...
    when you came in this world, you cried and the world rejoiced
    Live you life in such a way ...
    that when you leave, the world cries and you rejoice!!

    Well written.
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    again some pain....
    wont repeat my same comments again..
    good words..i can say..
  4. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    Words full of pain but i would like to reply you in a lovely way Rohit

    Believe in me for I am here
    To offer you my heart
    This precious gift of love I give
    This passion never parts
    To feel the gentle warmness
    Of Spring's most gentle kiss
    My love is so divine
    When love does beckon moonlight
    The brightness always shines
    Upon your heart forever
    A gift of love my soul
    A wonder of this beauty
    My heart is yours to hold...
  5. Rani

    Rani New Member


    There is no pain like the pain we feel for the loss of a loved one, i feel this poem it cuts so deep, if only we could turn our emotions on & off like a tap.

    :think: :think: :think:

    "The greatest courage on earth is to bear defeat without losing HEART."
  6. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    nicely expressed dude!!!!
  7. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    heart which do not lose for any emotions..is called stone....
    heart is bound to have all its sadness n happines....feel every pain..feel every pleasure... thats the virtue of being human

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