Hum aaj tuzko vida kar chale.. Meri mohabbat ko tuzse judaa kar chale.. Tune mohabbat muzse na ki thi kabhi.. Par mohabbat ka farz hum adaa kar chale.. Tamanna thi muzko wafa kare tubhi.. Armaanon ko dil me dabaa kar chale.. Patthar bhi pighle wafaaon se mere.. Hum mohabbat ko aise nibhaa kar chale.. Badi berukhi si adaa hai tumhari.. Ke jindagi meri tum tabaah kar chale.. Parr aabaad rahe ye duniyaa teri.. Hum dil se khudaa ko duaa kar chale..
bohot hi aacha likha hai Nimisha:rock: Kyun Tumhne Ki Mere Sang Bewafai Aaina Tumse Aksar Poocha Karega Maine Socha Nahi Ye Manjar Milega..... Meri Peeth Main Tera Khanjar Milega..... Banaya Khuda Maine Pooja Tha Jisko Socha Na Tha Vahi Mera Katil Banega Maine Socha Nahi Ye Manjar Milega..... Meri Peeth Main Tera Khanjar Milega.....
Kuch to baat hum se ki hoti to ye zindagi aisi nahi hoti Meri chahat ko parakh ne ke liye thodi qurbani ya to di hoti Wafa o ki aarzu thi tumhe to humein thodi muddat to di hoti kehte ho ke umeed thi tumhe humse sach hai ye to is ki umar itni kam nahi hoti Ek baar hum se shikayat agar karte tum to hum ne khud mein tabdiliya bhi ki hoti yuh jo saaare raah badnaam kar rahe ho humein ek baar mere es dil ki bhi sun li hoti Hum ne utara tha tumhe apni ruh mein aey sanam kaash ye baat tumne hamari aankho mein dekh li hoti
@nimisha.u r damn gud. whthr its tapori stuff or serious ones. some serious talent u got. cheers! @babydoll n sweetie.. nice
@amanush... thanks for reminding all people here anout this poem of mine... when nobody appreciates the efforts.. it discourages ur capacity... compliment from a awesome poet like u... is worth millions... @varsh... im eagerly looking for ur next work.... likhte rehnaa, hum padhte rahenge... @hardik... u have been real inspiration for me since i joined the igt... missed ur presence last few days... anyways good to see u again here replying one of my poems... plz take a look at my poem 'phir bhi na hogaa'.. i know.... u wud like it...
@apurb.. thanks dear.. keep replying... @babydoll n sweetie:nw: :nw: :nw: :nw: @subhro.. thats so nice of u to appreciate my every attempts... i wud like u to read my poem 'phir bhi na hoga..' i know.. people with a good taste like u, will appreciate that...
kyaa baat hai ajj kal METER Down chall raha hai ... Badi berukhi si adaa hai tumhari.. Ke jindagi meri tum tabaah kar chale.. vah vah ....but only for the usage of the words ...not for the thought....tabhaa tabahiii ...un know thi word came from tabiyaat ...tab means maan(vo "ji nahi kar raha vala" ..ji) App jin ke karreb hotain hain vo bade kush naseeb hote hain... jab tabiyaat kisi pe aati hai maut ke din karreb hoteen hain....
aaj kal meter down nahi hai mudhuresh....: this poem was posted on 15th december... but every1 must have not noticed it.. as i was just newbie that time.... thanks to amanush...that he brought up the thread again.... n as usual u r always help for me..when it comes to urdu... plz.. mere words ki knowledge aise hi badhaate rehnaa.... thanks...:nw:
