Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Apr 7, 2009.

  1. its a flat tall wall as i walk along
    they say i do not have the prespective
    if she's not for life, then who else is
    now u will say im hasty and subjective

    its all on the man ohh dear desitiny
    what he tells u waht he hide
    So from which ever dimensions u watch the little I
    this side wall makes the I D side

    i dont knw how to do it but its like this ....the letter "D" in the last line has a font size 38 and the "I" with 28 leaning on the "D"... so sorry but u have to imagine...its late letts sleep
  2. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    its nice! emotions being conveyed, it'd been much better with an italicized I and bigger D....
  3. thanks........

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