dream within a dream

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by rongbazzz, Jan 6, 2005.

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  1. rongbazzz

    rongbazzz F.U.C.K IS LIFE

    Take this kiss upon the brow!
    And, in parting from you now,
    Thus much let me avow-
    You are not wrong, who deem
    That my days have been a dream;
    Yet if hope has flown away
    In a night, or in a day,
    In a vision, or in none,
    Is it therefore the less gone?
    All that we see or seem
    Is but a dream within a dream.

    I stand amid the roar
    Of a surf-tormented shore,
    And I hold within my hand
    Grains of the golden sand-
    How few! yet how they creep
    Through my fingers to the deep,
    While I weep- while I weep!
    O God! can I not grasp
    Them with a tighter clasp?
    O God! can I not save
    One from the pitiless wave?
    Is all that we see or seem
    But a dream within a dream?

    waiting 4 replies....... ;)
  2. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Very Very Good. Really liked it. Write more stuff like this, don't deviate. Good work.
  3. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    that was good, rongbazz... a ruthless poetry( i frankly don't know why i feel this way).
  4. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    You actually copied something by Edgar Allen Poe...

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