dosti ka rasta hai bada pyara

ab kisi ki kami mehsus hoti hai
ab jindagi kuch kahne ko madhosh hoti hai
jane kaha kho jaye is jindagi ki mod mein
tum se sab sach bolne ko kahti hai

itne manzar aye
har mod par ek yaden judi hai
kya bataye
ki vo humse kya kahne ko chahkti hai
us pile patte par bhi hai khushi
par pile hone ki hai dukhi
is khushi mein vo hara bhara ho jata hai
bhatak kar vo phir raste par aa jata hai

hum bhi ye hi sochte hai ki
bhatak kar hum bhi us raste mein mud jaye
aur us dost se jud jaye

ye nahi hai bakwass
ye hai dil ki avas
jo jor-jor se kahti hai
lets live bindass

 

tum ne ek acchi poem ka stupid sa end kar diya... in all a very good try .. hope u will share more !!

 

thank u but mujhe ye stupid ends pasnd hai

 

vaise to mere ko bhi aisa ulta seedha likhna accha lagta hai .. ... supidistic pleasure *&^$#$^%$

 

nice one,,

 

ahh...writing in our own tongue is so very tough...but i really liked this thingy...cuz it doesnt contain any common words..
a very good one, indeed...