dosti ka rasta hai bada pyara

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by alkaharuno, Dec 10, 2011.

  1. alkaharuno

    alkaharuno New Member

    ab kisi ki kami mehsus hoti hai
    ab jindagi kuch kahne ko madhosh hoti hai
    jane kaha kho jaye is jindagi ki mod mein
    tum se sab sach bolne ko kahti hai

    itne manzar aye
    har mod par ek yaden judi hai
    kya bataye
    ki vo humse kya kahne ko chahkti hai
    us pile patte par bhi hai khushi
    par pile hone ki hai dukhi
    is khushi mein vo hara bhara ho jata hai
    bhatak kar vo phir raste par aa jata hai

    hum bhi ye hi sochte hai ki
    bhatak kar hum bhi us raste mein mud jaye
    aur us dost se jud jaye

    ye nahi hai bakwass
    ye hai dil ki avas
    jo jor-jor se kahti hai
    lets live bindass
     
  2. tum ne ek acchi poem ka stupid sa end kar diya... in all a very good try .. hope u will share more !!
     
  3. alkaharuno

    alkaharuno New Member

    thank u but mujhe ye stupid ends pasnd hai
     
  4. vaise to mere ko bhi aisa ulta seedha likhna accha lagta hai ..:p ... supidistic pleasure *&^$#$^%$
     
  5. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    nice one,,
     
  6. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ahh...writing in our own tongue is so very tough...but i really liked this thingy...cuz it doesnt contain any common words..
    a very good one, indeed...
     

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