here are ma lyrics ...i juss wrote some line...plz do comment Teher raha hoon machliee ki tarah Bina manzil ..ik kashtii ki tarah teher tai hoain sitare ginraha hoon Roshni ki raah dekh raha hoon Doobta nadiyoon main apni ap ko aasman pai dekh raha hoon zindagi chin rahi hai or main doob hoon is jal main
aree bacchee ... ok...if u dont know....what was that u wanted to say...u wrote but it some how went astray...u wanted to come back in the end lines but now it dosent just qualifies.......hmmm then u r the most deserving member of this forum ....rewrite the above by writng the end lines first...jus do it and post i will surely comment then
yaar really i dnt hav tyme to think nd continue coz ma exams ahead...i juss wrote it in ma free period...i`ll try to continue...thx for commentin
it was surely a nice attempt..but ending was a little abrupt...i second them..work on ur ending im sure you can make it better!
