Do you LOVE me??

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  1. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR


    A question i wanna ask..
    A question which may look foolish...

    Do you love me??

    A answer i expect...
    Doesnt matter whether its yes or no...

    Few people say i am mad...
    Few people say i am wasting my life...
    Few people say you are illogical..
    Are they true??

    I know,
    that we never meet...
    that we never see each other in person...
    that we never cry or laugh in conjunction...

    But if you say YES...
    the world can be so small...
    the world can be a beautiful place to live...
    the world can be just YOU and ME...

    REgards,
    Zooom...!!
     
    zoomingrocket, Mar 8, 2005
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  2. madhura

    madhura pani poori yum yum ....

    cho chweet .....
    simple
     
    madhura, Mar 8, 2005
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  3. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    :) Touching poem Zoooom!:) She's a lucky 'un, whoever she is:)
     
    d_ist_urb_ed, Mar 8, 2005
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  4. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Favorite part
    But if you say YES...
    the world can be so small...
    the world can be a beautiful place to live...
    the world can be just YOU and ME...

    can make anyone weak in the knees...:)
    Beautiful poem..
     
    BubblyMartini, Mar 8, 2005
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  5. lord_neo

    lord_neo Guest

    Zoom, why dont you send her the link to this web page ;)
     
    lord_neo, Mar 8, 2005
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  6. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    She reads it first.....

    @lord_neo: The poems written are exclusively for HER... I first send to her... and when she reads it.... then they are POSTED here!! :)


    REgards,
    Zooom...!!
     
    zoomingrocket, Mar 8, 2005
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  7. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    cool..thts the way it should be..afterall she's the subject;)
     
    BubblyMartini, Mar 9, 2005
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  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    awww.....that was sho shweet & touching...
     
    Garima, Jan 5, 2006
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  9. beginner_lavina

    beginner_lavina hokay

    who is she?
     
    beginner_lavina, Jan 5, 2006
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  10. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    wow...this poem is awesome....
    I especially like:

    the world can be so small...
    the world can be a beautiful place to live...
    the world can be just YOU and ME...

    thats a tru feelin wen ones in luv....
     
    tumhare_divya, Jan 5, 2006
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  11. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    i have the same question.......who is that lucky gal........man, she must be loving u like mad now........ :p:
    and ur poem is awesome, good going :beer:
     
    guitarangela, Jan 5, 2006
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  12. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e &lt;3V/S&lt;3 50 CeNt$

    Few people say i am mad...
    Few people say i am wasting my life...
    Few people say you are illogical..
    Are they true??

    I know,
    that we never meet...
    that we never see each other in person...
    that we never cry or laugh in conjunction...






    hey i lyk this prt of ur poem dude rilly nice i used to feel same for 6 yrs with one of da grl but wudnt mind to say these tht nothin is bettr thn knowin a person b4 u fall in luv

    its really nice to b in luv wen u no ev thing bout da person


    all da best for u n ur grl ..............thts all i can say ;)
     
    sanju_strings, Jan 5, 2006
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  13. probuddha

    probuddha Aspiring Guitarist

    Excellent poem !!
     
    probuddha, Jan 6, 2006
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  14. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    @everyone: I am single... :)
    Those lines i wrote long back....as part of my feelings... nothing more!

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
    zoomingrocket, Jan 6, 2006
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  15. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    ask "her" to post her feedback also ;)

    fave part>
    deeeeep poem!! :) u shud write more often mister!..trust me
     
    vini, Jan 6, 2006
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  16. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    @vini: I do write regularly...
    You can check my other poems posted here... Quite a few...in old threads..


    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
    zoomingrocket, Jan 6, 2006
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  17. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    very touching i must say..... very SWEET! :)
     
    #iR@, Jan 6, 2006
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