Disease ....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Bristy, May 26, 2005.

  1. Bristy

    Bristy ...


    We never know where we,ll go
    Or where we end up and how
    We try to focus and follow our way
    But someone always comes
    And messes up and off we go
    Off our ways and screwed
    It never matters how long it takes
    Itýs how hard it hits
    You can run and try to avoid it
    But it finds you wherever you go
    The place of infection of this disease
    Something sweet but sneaky
    The sun and the moon may collapse
    And this disease would still survive
    And ruin your thoughts of peace
    And make you scream
    This disease wherever you go
    Will find you and hit you
    It always does so
    And you,ll shed tears
    Because it really hurts
    And you,ll be scared
    Of everything else
    This disease that can even kill you
    So sweet a death youýll have
    Still wherever you go
    There it will be
    Don,t try to run
    It will make you sick
    And cry and pain will come
    And a fever that you never felt
    As if the heat will melt you
    And there it goes
    And messes you up
    This disease, yes this love
  2. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Wow. Really well written. I liked it a lot. Keep it up!!
  3. Bristy

    Bristy ...

    thanks tejas.......
  4. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    :nw: :nw: :nw: :nw: :nw: :nw: keep it up!!!!!
  5. Bristy

    Bristy ...

    Thanks Cypher.....
  6. Radius_Vector

    Radius_Vector New Member

    Nice one bristy, you know people should make some nice tunes out of some poems posted here, and who knows could be a hit!
  7. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    nicely written bristy....
  8. Bristy

    Bristy ...

    Thanks u guys......

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