Dip Dip Down---my poem

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Gaurav Bhatia, Sep 16, 2005.

  1. Gaurav Bhatia

    Gaurav Bhatia New Member

    Hi friends

    I recently wrote this poem.....hey....tell me how is it??

    Dip Dip Down

    Standing against the blowing storm
    Wondering where she comes from,
    Slowly dying with an unknown fear
    Dip Dip down arefalling my tears,

    Every single word echoes in my head
    I know u love me but u never said,
    Depicted by ur eyes with meaning crystal clear
    Dip Dip down are falling my tears

    By the time these lines would be read
    You would be crying as i would be dead,
    Sorry for this step, I had to make it here
    Dip Dip down "Falled" my tears.

  2. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    hey...nice one....but kinda sad....anyway keep it up dude.
  3. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    post deleted ...

    had posted some crap ... felt taht it awas wrong to pour it out here ...

    ne way poem is kinda what cypher says ...
  4. Gaurav Bhatia

    Gaurav Bhatia New Member

    hey i know its a sad one.........but y ppl didn't like it.......may its sad and negative.....anyways if u dont like it...i wont post any of this kind again....

  5. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    hey...i did like it...i just said its pretty sad...maybe u were going thru a bad patch wen u wrote it...thats a nice poem
  6. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    dude ... i didnt say i didnt like it ...

    i had actually posted some crap ... that i deleted ...
    that s all

    i like the your stuff
  7. Gaurav Bhatia

    Gaurav Bhatia New Member

    sorry i got it all wrong...thanx alot for liking my poem:)
  8. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    wow....cool goodie lyrics dude! :rock:

    i suppose it is "fell" n not falled!
  9. gnr311982

    gnr311982 New Member

    hey buddy kool poem
    seems like one more fellow had his heart crushed , broken , smithered.

    good one dude
  10. Gaurav Bhatia

    Gaurav Bhatia New Member

    hey rocking_devil ......agreed to u buddy ..............it should be "fell".......Thanx......
    and thank you all for showing interst in my poem....i have many more poems with me which has been written by me ...will post it soon.....
  11. Nanda

    Nanda Bassist

    Hey nice one dude ... But i am not much into the senti sort of songs .. prefer .. death and blood more .. ha ha ..
  12. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    ^ c'mon ... u yourself wrote a sissy sounding song ... the one which i said was kinda like Bryan Adams / Bon Jovi ;)
  13. Nanda

    Nanda Bassist

    Hey its been nearly 2 yrs since i wrote any ... Those sissy stuffs are wht i wrote some 6 yrs back !!!!
  14. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    k ... so u were SISSY taht time :phbbt: :p:
  15. Nanda

    Nanda Bassist

    mayb .. kinda... to an extent ..... whatever ... past is past ... better than today ...
  16. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    nice poem Gaurav

    do post some more..
    and hope things are alrite with u..
    take care
  17. Arka

    Arka New Member

    amazing man probably you're betrayed in love . sad but true like i've been too.
    Try writing up songs it goes great.
  18. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Nice one Gaurav...it doesn't matter if it was sad....as its a part of life...& u expressed it very well
    Good Job Done Dude :)
  19. somendra_guitar

    somendra_guitar New Member

    hey dyoood u r marvellous
    welcome to igt
    superb poem
  20. bhaskarrao009

    bhaskarrao009 New Member

    Is this Dr.Gaurav Bhatia???

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