Dip Dip Down---my poem

Hi friends

I recently wrote this poem.....hey....tell me how is it??


Dip Dip Down

Standing against the blowing storm
Wondering where she comes from,
Slowly dying with an unknown fear
Dip Dip down arefalling my tears,

Every single word echoes in my head
I know u love me but u never said,
Depicted by ur eyes with meaning crystal clear
Dip Dip down are falling my tears

By the time these lines would be read
You would be crying as i would be dead,
Sorry for this step, I had to make it here
Dip Dip down "Falled" my tears.


gaurav

 

hey...nice one....but kinda sad....anyway keep it up dude.

 

post deleted ...

had posted some crap ... felt taht it awas wrong to pour it out here ...

ne way poem is kinda what cypher says ...

 

hey i know its a sad one.........but y ppl didn't like it.......may its sad and negative.....anyways if u dont like it...i wont post any of this kind again....

gaurav

 

hey...i did like it...i just said its pretty sad...maybe u were going thru a bad patch wen u wrote it...thats a nice poem

 

dude ... i didnt say i didnt like it ...

i had actually posted some crap ... that i deleted ...
that s all

i like the your stuff

 

sorry i got it all wrong...thanx alot for liking my poem

 

wow....cool goodie lyrics dude! :rock:

i suppose it is "fell" n not falled!

 

hey buddy kool poem
seems like one more fellow had his heart crushed , broken , smithered.

good one dude

 

hey rocking_devil ......agreed to u buddy ..............it should be "fell".......Thanx......
and thank you all for showing interst in my poem....i have many more poems with me which has been written by me ...will post it soon.....

 

Hey nice one dude ... But i am not much into the senti sort of songs .. prefer .. death and blood more .. ha ha ..

 

^ c'mon ... u yourself wrote a sissy sounding song ... the one which i said was kinda like Bryan Adams / Bon Jovi

 

Hey its been nearly 2 yrs since i wrote any ... Those sissy stuffs are wht i wrote some 6 yrs back !!!!

 

k ... so u were SISSY taht time hbbt: :

 

mayb .. kinda... to an extent ..... whatever ... past is past ... better than today ...

 

nice poem Gaurav

do post some more..
and hope things are alrite with u..
take care

 

amazing man probably you're betrayed in love . sad but true like i've been too.
Try writing up songs it goes great.

 

Nice one Gaurav...it doesn't matter if it was sad....as its a part of life...& u expressed it very well
Good Job Done Dude

 

hey dyoood u r marvellous
really
welcome to igt
superb poem

 

Is this Dr.Gaurav Bhatia???