"Dosti ka lafzon main baya hona zaruri nahi Jaise har nazar main pyar hona zaruri nahi Har dhadkan main basa lete hai dosto ko jab koi Jine ke liye saanson ka hona zaruri nahi" Hey People Following is a poem which means a lot to me.. its on the theme of Friendship.. A relation which is very close to heart and has taught me a lot its dedicated to a very special person.. and i may have gone wrong in putting the right words describing that person and the beautiful relation we share but i guess knowing me that person will understand : Do give me your comments Like i always say Good or bad jus be honest some may find it a bit too long but i actually cut off a whole para : anwys The Poem:- ~Dil Se Dil Ki Dosti~ Muskura rahe hai hum Jaise kaha aapne woh aazma rahe hai hum Chahe pehchaane ye duniya har gum ko Kehke manchala badnaam kare is dil ko Kuch gumo ko bhulna hum bhi chahe Kuch khushiyo se khudko behlana hum bhi chahe Gairo ki bheed main hum na jaane kyo kho gaye? Jise yaad karna hai zaruri, kyo use hi bhool gaye? Ye paigaam chahe aapko na bhaye Kuch baatain humari chahe aapko pasand na aaye Dil ke ik kone aap rehte ho humesha Ek jawaab bankar aap milte ho humesha Aadat na ho jaye hume aapki Bina puuche jo mili ye dosti aapki Karz ye hum kabhi chuka na sakege Dosti ka haq shayad ada kar na sakege Bus ik aakhri khwaish hai humari Zakhmon ko chhupana aadat na banao apni Bus ek baar aietbaar kar lo is nacheez par Humari tarah kabhi zindagi na bitao ik guzare hue kal par Sabko muskurana sikhate hai aap Sari khushiya doosro par barabaad karte hai aap Ik aakhri khushi aap humko de do Zindagi apne liye jina seekh lo In lafzon ke sahare hum aapko kuch kehna chahe Zindagi se door chalkar hum ik nayi zindagi chahe Bus umeed hai yahi ke aapse juda ho na jaye kabhi Jo wade kiye aapse woh bhool na jaye kabhi. Gar door chale bhi gaye hum aapse. Kahega ye dil bhi humse Ki "Tu bhi chal wahi Dost hai jaha teri manzil hai wahi Milte hai dosti ke haath har kahi Lekin na mile har dil se pyaar bhari Dosti." Martina ----,-'--<@
Wow... Thats amazing !! Very beautifully written and conveys the deepest of feelings for your friend. Lucky person !! Good one martina :rock:
Beautiful... This one really makes me proud, that, I am in your friends list Really nice... Words cant praise the emotions expressed here... It can be only felt... REgards, Zooom..!!
Thanks Varshu-- To be very honest I'm still not satisfied with the way its turned out.. i still feel i could've done a better job.. but anwys.. Some things jus cant be explained The last para actually was the reason for the title.... and thanks for your wishes dear...i hope they come true Thanks dude!!.. glad u like it! sometimes its hard not to show emotions..but words arent able to withhold them Thanks!!... its nice you could relate to it.. Thanks madhuresh err..is your pet name madhu.. :think:
Na kaho tum hume dost yuhi dosti lage hume pyaar se badi... Such hai dilbar humsa paoge nahi ek gum dege ki sambhal paoge nahi:
*claps* ..abhi ye ...isska koii javab soojhta nahi...i mean hai magar bahar nahi aata (in phrases ) .....but listen *i am a good friend 4 friends*..
I had been keepin away from poetry forum for a while now .. but jz couldn't resist anymore to reply to this poem .. Absolutely fantastic .. Showz ur pure emotions towards ur friendz .. n Wat Makes it even more amazing is da comments u've written before da poem .. I'm jz imaginin how special dat guy will feel after readin all this .. He surely is a Very lucky brat lemme tell u .. Any writers for me : ???? :
After knowing the main motive behind writing the poem it tends to get more interesting to read it i usually dont do that with my poems never explain why or in what mood i wrote a particular mood but it was different with this one.. and what i said about the special relation is quite true there may be many friends a person may have but theres a unique special bond shared with a few.. and i didnt mention whether its a guy or a gal.. but yh..it is a guy.. and he's a Super Fantabulous friend..i dont think you would happen to meet him anywhere! thanks for your comments dear!
Rule No 1.. Comment on the poem when you read it Rule No 2.. Never spam in Poetry Lounge : Rule No 3..and the Most important Never use the F word loosely! i mean Friendship..!!