~Dil Se Dil Ki Dosti~

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by BubblyMartini, Mar 1, 2006.

  1. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    "Dosti ka lafzon main baya hona zaruri nahi
    Jaise har nazar main pyar hona zaruri nahi
    Har dhadkan main basa lete hai dosto ko jab koi
    Jine ke liye saanson ka hona zaruri nahi"

    Hey People

    Following is a poem which means a lot to me..
    its on the theme of Friendship..
    A relation which is very close to heart and has taught me a lot :)
    its dedicated to a very special person..
    and i may have gone wrong in putting the right words describing that person and the beautiful relation we share
    but i guess knowing me that person will understand :p:

    Do give me your comments
    Like i always say Good or bad jus be honest
    some may find it a bit too long
    but i actually cut off a whole para :eek::


    The Poem:-

    ~Dil Se Dil Ki Dosti~

    Muskura rahe hai hum
    Jaise kaha aapne woh aazma rahe hai hum
    Chahe pehchaane ye duniya har gum ko
    Kehke manchala badnaam kare is dil ko

    Kuch gumo ko bhulna hum bhi chahe
    Kuch khushiyo se khudko behlana hum bhi chahe
    Gairo ki bheed main hum na jaane kyo kho gaye?
    Jise yaad karna hai zaruri, kyo use hi bhool gaye?

    Ye paigaam chahe aapko na bhaye
    Kuch baatain humari chahe aapko pasand na aaye
    Dil ke ik kone aap rehte ho humesha
    Ek jawaab bankar aap milte ho humesha

    Aadat na ho jaye hume aapki
    Bina puuche jo mili ye dosti aapki
    Karz ye hum kabhi chuka na sakege
    Dosti ka haq shayad ada kar na sakege

    Bus ik aakhri khwaish hai humari
    Zakhmon ko chhupana aadat na banao apni
    Bus ek baar aietbaar kar lo is nacheez par
    Humari tarah kabhi zindagi na bitao ik guzare hue kal par

    Sabko muskurana sikhate hai aap
    Sari khushiya doosro par barabaad karte hai aap
    Ik aakhri khushi aap humko de do
    Zindagi apne liye jina seekh lo

    In lafzon ke sahare hum aapko kuch kehna chahe
    Zindagi se door chalkar hum ik nayi zindagi chahe
    Bus umeed hai yahi ke aapse juda ho na jaye kabhi
    Jo wade kiye aapse woh bhool na jaye kabhi.

    Gar door chale bhi gaye hum aapse.
    Kahega ye dil bhi humse
    Ki "Tu bhi chal wahi
    Dost hai jaha teri manzil hai wahi
    Milte hai dosti ke haath har kahi
    Lekin na mile har dil se pyaar bhari Dosti."


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  2. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Wow... Thats amazing !!
    Very beautifully written and conveys the deepest of feelings for your friend. Lucky person !!
    Good one martina :rock:
  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    I loved the last para.....Touchwood for u ppl....hope this frndship goes forever n evr....
  4. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    This one really makes me proud, that, I am in your friends list :)

    Really nice... Words cant praise the emotions expressed here... It can be only felt...

  5. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    That's truly amazing......I could relate to it.keep it up.reps for you.....:)
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    yeh thought accha hai...dosty...it inspires me to write something :)
  7. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Thanks Varshu-- To be very honest I'm still not satisfied with the way its turned out..
    i still feel i could've done a better job.. but anwys.. Some things jus cant be explained ;)

    The last para actually was the reason for the title.... and thanks for your wishes dear...:)i hope they come true

    Thanks dude!!.. glad u like it!
    sometimes its hard not to show emotions..but words arent able to withhold them;)

    Thanks!!... its nice you could relate to it..:)

    Thanks madhuresh
    err..is your pet name madhu.. :think:
  8. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    actually i have no pets..hahaha
    its manu .....
  9. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    i'l be addressing u as manu hence:)
  10. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    kuch bhi kaho aaye dost, shikva nahi koii
    dil dhoondata hai dilbar, aur tumsa nahi koii
  11. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Na kaho tum hume dost yuhi
    dosti lage hume pyaar se badi...
    Such hai dilbar humsa paoge nahi
    ek gum dege ki sambhal paoge nahi:p:
  12. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    *claps* ..abhi ye ...isska koii javab soojhta nahi...i mean hai magar bahar nahi aata (in phrases ) .....but listen *i am a good friend 4 friends*..
  13. slash_i_m

    slash_i_m Laid to Rest

    Really nice... Words cant praise the emotions expressed here... It can be only felt... :)very niice
  14. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    @Manu- Shukriya...:)
    @Slash- Thanks dude...
  15. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    I had been keepin away from poetry forum for a while now .. but jz couldn't resist anymore to reply to this poem .. Absolutely fantastic .. Showz ur pure emotions towards ur friendz .. n Wat Makes it even more amazing is da comments u've written before da poem ..
    I'm jz imaginin how special dat guy will feel after readin all this .. He surely is a Very lucky brat lemme tell u ..

    Any writers for me :eek:: ???? :p:
  16. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    After knowing the main motive behind writing the poem
    it tends to get more interesting to read it
    i usually dont do that with my poems
    never explain why or in what mood i wrote a particular mood
    but it was different with this one..

    and what i said about the special relation is quite true
    there may be many friends a person may have
    but theres a unique special bond shared with a few..

    and i didnt mention whether its a guy or a gal..
    but yh..it is a guy..
    and he's a Super Fantabulous friend..i dont think you would happen to meet him anywhere!:)

    thanks for your comments dear!:)
  17. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e &lt;3V/S&lt;3 50 CeNt$

    :p: u dun lyk my threads but i lyk urs :p:

    frens ;) ?
  18. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Rule No 1.. Comment on the poem when you read it
    Rule No 2.. Never spam in Poetry Lounge :p:
    Rule No 3..and the Most important Never use the F word loosely!

    i mean Friendship..!!
  19. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e &lt;3V/S&lt;3 50 CeNt$

    poem is gud thts wht i said hey bhagwan uthalay :shock:
  20. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM


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