dhuk dhuk

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Mar 5, 2006.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Title : dhuk dhuk

    Badi nazuk si cheez tha, chota sa naam tha
    left side main rehta tha, dhadakana hi kaam tha...

    kuch keh to raha tha kal se, dhuk-dhuk si kar ke vo
    vaise to banda kush tha, jabtalaq be-jabaan tha...

    yadon ki jeans, khabon ki shirt, josh ke shoes pehne huye
    chere se bhola-bhala, nazar se haairaan tha...

    "abki baar ayegi to, ghar ja ke milenge"
    ye keh ke uss pagal ko manana aasaan tha...

    dekh lo aye yaar jara, tumhare pass hi na ho
    mil-jaye to kehana manu pareshaan tha...

    Badi nazuk si cheez tha, chota sa naam tha
    left side main rehta tha, dhadakana hi kaam tha..
     
  2. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    "left side"? Stick to one language, it messes up your poem otherwise.
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    areee koii na bhi padhe to kyaa fark padta hai dost...teri samajh main aa gaya na ...bahut hai.....haha..... main to khud hi padh ke kush hoo leta hoon :-D...my comments on the poem is "aisi bateen sab ko nahi bataya karte"
    and my reply is : no body knows me here ;)
     
  4. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    hehe:)
    acha hai koi nahi pehchaanta..nahi to....

    cute poem
    favorite lines
    "dekh lo aye yaar jara, tumhare pass hi na ho
    mil-jaye to kehana manu pareshaan tha...

    Badi nazuk si cheez tha, chota sa naam tha
    left side main rehta tha, dhadakana hi kaam tha.."
     
  5. vishwa_reborn

    vishwa_reborn New Member

    nice poem but don't u think the title shud be dhak dhak in stead of dhuk dhuk.. reminds me madhuri dixit... in that sensous no.
     
  6. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ^^ haha..me too dhak dhak or dhuk dhuk..short and sweet poem...and VISH wc back buddy........
     
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    @bubbly ji
    nahi to..?( shaak yakeen main badal jata, ki ye banda hateela hai...right ?)
    PS:- app ne dhoondha ....dhek lo kahi tumre dil ke pass na gaya hoo...just check ....
    @Vishva.....haan ye bhi sahi hai...pata nahi itna kaun sooche.......ye dhuk dhuk bhi bura nahi hai...hai na ??

    @abhi..thanks
     
  8. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Wah Wah....kya baat hai.............chahe dhak dhak bolo ya dhuk dhuk.....awaz to left - side se hi nikalti hai..

    maza aa gaya.
     
  9. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    @walk alone.......True....
    jab-jab tight kapdo main, bandi office aati thi
    jane kis remote se, dhadkan ka volume badhati thi
     
  10. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    "nahi to"...samajhdar ke liye ishaara hi kaafi hai..:)
    .
    aur aap humare dil ki baatain humse na karo..
    agar woh humare paas hota toh baat kuch aur hoti;)
     
  11. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    madhuresh.. i wud like too see ur urdu poems or those hindi ones wit heavy words... after all u r my guru in my vocabulary
     
  12. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    hah thats all boring and dont call me guru and all ....i think have earned a bad name on this forum.....it will take lot of words to explain ..Ek karunga 'cause cant say no to the word in ur name ......
     

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