Destiny

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by suchacutename, Nov 30, 2004.

  1. suchacutename

    suchacutename New Member

    here is something i wrote some time ago.

    Destiny

    it was as if...
    that's the way
    it was meant to be
    you and me...
    meeting like this
    that split second..
    how it changed my empty world
    the world that is
    now full of me and you
    nothing was same after that
    it was some kind of magic
    that you and i create
    we watched in splendor
    as life unfolded it self
    reveling it's inner beauty
    as if nothing was
    left to just a chance
    it was as if...
    that's the way
    it was meant to be
    all those lonely nights
    all those dreams and frights
    they all seems to disappear
    as our lives brought
    you and me so near..
    it wasn't by any luck
    it wasn't by any chance
    it was just simple destiny..
    it is...how it was meant to be.
     
  2. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Brilliant effort er...suchacutename(btw what is yer name?), keep it up:)
     
  3. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Nice effort... hope to see more from you... :)
     
  4. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    very optimistic and refreshing...
     
  5. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    nice work there suchacutename
     
  6. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Good job. And his name is supposed to be "such a cute name".
     
  7. suchacutename

    suchacutename New Member

    heya all,

    thanks a lot.. i love to write its one of my passions... tejas its a SHE by the way ;)...
    disturbed...
    naam mai cheepi hai palko ke kahani,
    thodi se jani.. to thodi anjani...

    SCN
     
  8. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    clap clap clap ,... u surely can write maam ;)

    tejas , :p
     
  9. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Sorry.....I know how it feels, trust me......
     
  10. suchacutename

    suchacutename New Member

    thks u guys... :p:
     
  11. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    ur welcome , hope to see more stuffs from you ... and participate in essi's thread abt poetry writing , a sticky one on this board ...
     

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