Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Nirvanafreak, Feb 20, 2005.

  1. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    Been tormented by everyone,for years and years,
    I’m stuck in a circle of eternal fears,
    Sometimes I’d just like to leave it all behind,
    But everyone thinks I’m out of my mind,
    You’ve gotta get rid of them as soon as it starts,
    Rip them into pieces and break their hearts,
    Destroy everything they love most and set it on fire,
    Rip away their hopes and kill their desire,
    But too many has happened as time passed by,
    Now all we can do is let it be and cry,
    They’ve poisoned our blood,there’s nothing we can do,
    But now I sit here and wonder...what did I do to you?

    Hehe,I wrote this one when I was really pissed off :badmood:
  2. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Yeah, I can see that. Good job.
  3. rev

    rev New Member

    Amazing! I like it a lot. You actually go through desperation, anger, submission and still manage a smile in the end. Now, that is what I call a poem.
  4. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    I'd like to see some more feedback on this one :p:

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