Despaired !

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by rickkkyrich, Jul 23, 2012.

  1. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    If i have it all then why do i feel sad
    Afraid and frightened all the time, Feeling like a man unclad
    I'm tired of pretending to be so strong, faking my smile
    When I'm afraid of losing something that's not even mine
    I wanna cry out loud but the tears don't fall
    Just can't help it, coz i am a man after-all
    I am going crazy or maybe this feeling doesn't have a name
    I think the reason is me and there's nobody else to blame
    Why can't i just hide in a place of serenity
    Why does everything around me seems so dirty
    Maybe I'll get better or used to this pain
    But i know no matter how hard i try my effort will be in vain...
  2. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    I'll not say that its your best, you've been better before, but its a smooth-flowing piece of poetic thoughts.
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    too much of negativity!
    ull come out dude..ggood luck :)
  4. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    That's what it was supposed to be.
  5. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    I take things too seriously at times when they are not supposed to be...Thanks !

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