Despair The fading days From the misty mind Couldn't fade the darkness Of the lost lorn life The shadows even walked Their own distant ways Leaving no moment to wander But the ladder to despair. ------------------------------- Hey buddies, I've written these few lines on 8th Jan, 2004 at 1:55 am which came out straight from my heart that night. Please let me know how it is.
Nice, I like people writing original poetry n i'm proud of u my friend n i kno all other IGT members r 2. Waiting eagerly for some more.
Good work. But lengthen it a bit. I know, it feels very crisp this way, but a few more lines will not spoil it, i assure u.