Despair

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Sanjay Mazumder, Jan 3, 2005.

  1. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Despair

    The fading days
    From the misty mind
    Couldn't fade the darkness
    Of the lost lorn life
    The shadows even walked
    Their own distant ways
    Leaving no moment to wander
    But the ladder to despair.
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    Hey buddies, I've written these few lines on 8th Jan, 2004 at 1:55 am which came out straight from my heart that night. Please let me know

    how it is.
     
  2. mr_bean

    mr_bean New Member

    Nice, I like people writing original poetry n i'm proud of u my friend n i kno all other IGT members r 2. Waiting eagerly for some more.
     
  3. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Thanks Mr_bean.
     
  4. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Good work. But lengthen it a bit. I know, it feels very crisp this way, but a few more lines will not spoil it, i assure u.
     
  5. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Thanks Tejas.
    Well, Thanks again for the suggestion. I'll try to lengthen it a bit.
     
  6. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    good work sanjay...
     
  7. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Thanks mave..........
     
  8. rohailsak

    rohailsak New Member

    kick ass yaar

    portrays true feelings !
    very touching

    keep it up
     
  9. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    ^^^^Yea, I'm gonna do that buddy. lol..... Well, thanks a lot.
     
  10. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    short and to the point.....I like it. Again, I like your writing style.
     
  11. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Oh Rey, thanks a lot. I'm happy as an expert has liked my poem.
     
  12. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    well, exactly!
     
  13. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Yeah..... What to call an expert other than an expert?
     
  14. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    ohhhhhhhhhhh..thank you...practice makes me perfect...since age 10
     

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