Deer and the Lion

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Nov 20, 2009.

  1. am hungry today, forgot my dinner time
    my mind wants me to be a scavanger, but i dellude him with this rhyme...

    there was this cage, far in the mountains dark
    where lived a white lion
    No one feared him cause no one knw him
    no one called him by his name that was sion

    One day a hunter
    running behind a deer
    blowing bullets through his gun
    saw sion
    and shouted ohh lion ohh lion
    and ran back and this was fun

    the deer said thank-you,
    sion not knowing what to do
    he fell in love with her, big deep eyes
    they satarted living
    a new begning
    lovely morning, husky musky nights

    But
    the hunter came back
    with some bastards and some brats
    they all wore big hats, boots tight
    the deer said sion
    ur must act like a lion
    like a lion and go and fight

    by nature a hunter
    he went like thunder
    chukked two got a shot
    the chances of the men's escaped
    they were weak
    with chances soo bleek
    the lion with hi deep jaws elaped

    in the wild the brave
    with a bolood-drenced shave
    went back to the cave, feeling hungry
    the deer kept a distance
    said sion ur a danger man
    For now i wuld leave or u will kill me
     
  2. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    LOL
    Lion and deer.

    And whats with Sion? You live near that area?
     
  3. nope ..i live in a very very buzy city ...
    and i imagine of farr off palces ...and i need some real dangers to have fun...
    these days r booring
     
  4. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Real dangers, hmmm, ;)
     
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    i like stories........mmmmmmm...good
     
  6. thanks ....i love stories ...can u post one?
     
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    storiess

    horsemouth ... we r waiting!
     
  8. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Nice idea..but self-explanatory title, bad grammar and typos ruined it for me.Oh and forced rhyming!I've read your work earlier..since when did u get hooked onto rhyming?
     

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