Forgive me for another follies of my youth :nw: Dead Phoenix ------------------- When I was young and innocent I spread my little wings Too little for the flight My little wings ached As I just and flapped hard To fly a little To the sun To where I belong As I looked at te sun Little Wings ached no more Torn Apart in my heart My soul cried My little wings betrayed I wiped my tears And promised to come to the sun To where I belong When I grew My desired grew An innocent one no more I was I spread my wings of dreams Across the blue skies Tears rolled down my eyes As I flew to the sun To where I belong The sun burnt my wings My dreams fell dead to ashes I looked at the sun And cried my last Little wings betrayed again My desires dead and promise unkept To fly to the sun To where I belong
The sun burnt my wings My dreams fell dead to ashes I looked at the sun And cried my last Little wings betrayed again My desired dead and promise unkept To fly to the sun To where I belong __________________ cool man smiply superb
Gee.... Thanks. I am feeling shy. Had a lot more but was kinda ashamed to post it. It sounded too stupid to me when I read if today after so many years.
^^^hehehehehe....yeah.....i too have a lotsa poems like these which i find suking shit piece when i read it after long time! but aywayz,, its good yaar!
I wrote the whole thing in less than 5 minutes. I had the whole thing coming in my sleep. So I just woke up and wrote it down. I have no clue of what was the intention or theme or whatever for this one. It still sounds kinda mystic to me. I am not sure of what's the real meaning behind the thing. I will post one more called Darkness. Had typed it here but didn't press the submit button and deleted it finally. Still too shy to post it. :annoyed:
woww man seems ure back .. !! gr88 .. welcome back essi edit : ohh i just saw that uve been here frm some time now
