Days That Were

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by folkpoet80, Jul 15, 2006.

  1. folkpoet80

    folkpoet80 New Member

    Here's a recent song of mine I wrote. Hope you mates like it.
    I also tried a minor composition and recorded it. Here's the Audio:
    Days That Were

    Sometimes I long for days that were
    Filled with simple things we used to do
    Staying up at night, singing with glee
    Songs that taught us all a thing or two

    Granny would play her old violin
    Mama, she sure could keep a beat
    While us kids clapped to the tune
    To that melody, oh so sweet

    Growing up in old familiar lanes
    Oh, through the seasons – without a care
    Sometimes I look back and feel so strange
    May be I’m just a child still living there

    Friends, I had a few I’d call my own
    But now it’s all a faded memory
    Lost in photographs from long ago
    If it were mine, I know just where I’d be

    Back in those old familiar lanes
    Searching for the faces from my past
    May be sing a song that I once knew
    That’s the place where dreams forever last

    So I sit, oh wishing all the while
    For the days that were and will be
    A part of my very heart and soul
    Oh, my friend, a part of you and me
    Those were the days, yes they were.

    Gautam Dhar
    1st July 2006
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  2. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    havent heard composition, but surely the lyrics sounds cool..
    reps for u..
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    good one again...ur certainly different ;)
  4. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :rock: reps for u....
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    quite a pleasant poem
    good to hear it in your voice
    sounds great with music..
    gives me a retro feel
    awesome whistling man!
    its perfect..could make anyone "rewind"!:)

    pssst ..for those who havent heard the song..give it a listen

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