Darr

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by DesiPride143, Dec 1, 2004.

  1. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    Darr

    Hamesha hamne suna
    Pyar kabhi na karna
    Yeh eik aisi bimaari hain
    Jis se hamesha darna

    Hum bhi auro(others) ki tarah
    Pyar - Muhabbat se rahane lage pare
    Jab bhi kisi se milte to
    Rahte thay, bahut darre - darre(scared)

    Bahut se dil dekhe
    Kuch tute kuch bikhare
    Vadaa kiya yeh khud se
    Is pyar ko hamesha rakhenge pare

    Eik din kuch aisa hua
    Eik ladki ko dekh kar
    Dil mein kuch - kuch hua
    Jab maine Jikre kiya mere dost se
    usne kahaan "yaar tujhe to pyar hua"

    okay...i know, my poems are simple and typical but atleast i give it a try. ;)

    aziz
     
  2. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Nice, very nice... but incomplete!! tell us what happened after that... :)
     
  3. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    After that Read my poem "I love You" ;)
    i don't know dude, i thought that was the ending but i could probably write more, i guess...
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ye aadmi mujhe accha laga..dost ye language kaha se seekhee...
    "apni dhun main rehta hoon main bhi tere jaisa hoon"
     

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