Dard ka mausam

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Ali Yawar, Oct 11, 2012.

  1. Ali Yawar

    Ali Yawar New Member

    Meri barbaadi ka saama ho chala hai,
    Ishq ab aur aasa ho chala hai.

    Kuch us shakhs ka jadoo hai ajab …
    Aur kuch ye dil bhi nadaa ho chala hai.

    Vasl hai uska jaise meer ki baatein..
    Hijr bhi ab shayrana ho chala hai.

    Apne dil mein mujhe ghar banane de..
    Tera aashiq bethikanaa ho chala hai.

    Hamne zakhm d*i*k*hae to usne kaha“”rahne do”,
    dard ka mausam purana ho chala hai…

    ab na to phool hain,na parinde,na hi uski khushboo..
    baagh mera ab biyabaan ho chala hai….
     
  2. accha likha hai

    i liked it ...ek meri tarf se bhi add kar lo..

    kal jis agoosh main mera vajood rehta tha
    abb vo kootha kisi aur ka thikaana ho chala hai
     
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ahh...
    It starts as a beautifully romantic one, so i couldn't bear to see the pain in the end
    it's beautiful, but you've written better before.
    Keep posting! Cheers!
     
  4. Ali Yawar

    Ali Yawar New Member

    Thanks guys... Monica... ur couplet is brilliant......
     

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