Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by the_wizard, Oct 6, 2005.

  1. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    got this from the net...NOT MY WORK

    its written by a dude who has recently lost his father

    Why can’t I just wake up?
    That’s all I want to do
    I know this is all just a big dream
    I haven’t really lost you.

    I just won’t believe it
    I know that it can’t be
    I thot I meant so much to you
    You wouldn’t just leave me.

    When I was really little
    You were all I had
    You were my best friend then
    Not only just my dad.

    The love I had for you
    Was unconditional
    My heart no longer beats the same
    It feels like there’s a hole.

    I don’t know how I can make it now
    Without you by my side
    We were starting to get close again
    Why did you have to die?

    How can I go on now?
    My life is all down hill
    The world is moving around me
    And I just stand still.

    I can see it now
    You’ve just gone and left me
    When all along in my life
    You promised you’d protect me.

    I can’t believe you did it
    And left me just like that
    In my lucky in life
    I have a 50% chance at bat.

    Everything that I love I lose
    In this life I’ve been shown
    That I will eventually lose it all
    I’m better off alone.
  2. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    thats really nice one...........
  3. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    it is sad

    n u ruined my day

  4. hate_eternal

    hate_eternal Banned

    Sad :(, but sweetly written.
  5. #iR@


    very sweet.......... nice work by whoever rote it..............
  6. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    simply gr8.. whoever wrote it.. but good job wizard.. u let us know abt it.. by posting it..
  7. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Sad =(, but amazing....yeah, now even my day is gone for a toss...cos now m feeling sad too =(((
  8. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned true......unique n one of its kind!
  9. diva

    diva Banned

    very nice. Thanx for sharing
  10. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    actually i myself dont know who wrote it...just found it one of the blogs...
  11. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    @da wizard of oz - hey have checked out the lyrics of BUT IT RAINED by parikrama??........they too have the similar lyrics of a child whose father is lost!.....but its much more well written......give it a look at their title website!:rockon:
  12. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    yup...i have chked the song....the best by Parikrama....and the video was good too....this is done by a child some 14-15 yr old so cannot expect an artistic touch from him..

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