Daastan-e-Mohabbat (A Tale of Love)

Hi palz .. Its been very long since i posted a poem here .. so thought of comin up wid a Poem which describes a Journey of love from start to end

Now lets see if I get as many responses as da GALS get : ..

 

Wow...
I just dont have words to praise this one..
This one is straight from the heart...

Beautiful lines bro..

REgards,
Zooom..!!

 

Bahut gaheri chot khai lagta hai..
Tab hi to itni dard bhari dasta sunai hai..

Excellent mamu..
Regards..
Rock..!!

 

Thanx a ZILLION Zoom n Pushkar .. I mean those words of appreciation Felt so good u wont believe .. I'm really glad .. This calls for .. :beerbob: :beer:



PS - U guys hit da nail .. U know y

 

:shock: My My....Mohsin...konsi wali ke liye likha hai :

itz just awesome :nw: loved it....wud rep u...i kno i cant rite now..but wud definetly rep u for this.......

b regular...thats wat i wud say...it ws a pleasure reading that poem frm u....

 

You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to notty_lad again. WTH, i hate this rule, i'm gonna do a hunger strike(ok so not a hunger strike)

 

umm... What should i say.. i have no words... have read it like 4 times... and dunno where to start from.
I know exactly what u feel there...what it must have felt like.
It holds such strong emotions... and has been excellently conveyed through wonderful words. Some of which i had never even heard of before. I m glad u provided the translation along with it. Or else i would have been completely lost without you.
Its amazing the way you ve expressed it all. Cant seem to find the right words to praise the effort and the feelings both. No amount of praising will do justice to it !!
To sum it up in one word.....Awesome !! :rock:

 

@garry, Sarat, Varshu .. Ur words are like makin me feel special .. One emotional journey was writin dat poem .. n Ur takin me thru another one .. donno how to respond to ur precious comments : .. will jz say Thanx in OODLES ..


PS - I'm MISSING So many reps these days :cry2: .. I want them after u've spread enuff .. Understand !!!! :

 

Dont know if i qualify to comment... dont worry i'l wont talk much..as if i do!:

anwys dear..
your really good at writing...
it sure was Long Time since you'd posted anything..

Do post and be regular here..

^That makes me think..
and thats not good for people like Martina:
the feelings reflect and the words speak...
and all this while i thought i was the only Smile of Disguise over here..

jus like to say
Dont let anything or anyone change you,
Your more than Good the way you are..

*a hug*
Take care..

PS- you'l soon be surprise by something soon..
lol..keep thinking about it...
oops ..i jus asked you Think!
u see according to Some People I play with words :

 

hmmmmm....very nice poem..but but...why does the end of it have to be spent in lonliness....Are u that sure the person u r talking about will leave u in lonliness like that...:think:
This is the first time i am actually replying to a hindi poem...cuz this is the first time i actually tried to comprehend it....:
I am just outta words to praise the poem....just the way how u played magic with words is too impressive I will rep ya if i can...otherwise, u know(xoxoxoxox: )

 

@Bubbly .. Thanx so much buddy for all ur comments n compliments.. U sure qualify to comment n not only dat .. u qualify to tell me watever u feel .. n Hey Y do u think dat Its based on muh life : .. as I told earlier .. its jz a description of A love story .. n THANX a ZILLION for ur surprise .. I was such a pleasant surprise .. Thanx a ZILLION AGAIN .. :ROSE: .. *Hugs u too*

@Angela .. Great to see ur first reply to any hindi poem here .. Thanx so much for ur compliments .. n A VERY VERY special thanx for those Hugs n Kisses ..

*Hugs n Kisses back* *With more Affection*

 

bohot khub :nw:

yadein haseen to hoti hai per terpati bohot hain
yaar ki judai mey ye dil ko rulati bohot hain
aansoun se hum us ki judai seh lete hain magar
kia karein dil ko us ki yaad satati bohot hai

 

Baby Doll .. Thanx .. n I donno y n how people inspire me to write some lines ..

Yaadein haseen hogi to tadapna manzoor hai ..
Dil mein ho yaar to ashq peena manzoor hai..
Ise chahat nahi humaari dewaangi samajh lo
Maut ko gale laga lu par judai nahi manzoor hai

 

^^ Wah Wah.. kya baat hai.. mohsin miyan .. aap ko pyar ne shayar bana diya

 

Thanx varshu ?? but wats wrong wid everyone .. some are tellin i'm hurt in love .. n some are tellin I am in love :RollLol: .. Javed akhtar writes so many Love songs and Sad songs as well .. does dat mean he's lovin and bein betrayed all da time : ..


PS - Somehow people are reluctant to read a poem wen some GUY writes somethin in hindi/urdu .. I guess there are not many hindi fans here .. was expecting more replies ..

 

^Bah, english, urdu, it's all the same, girls get more replies than guys, it's the norm......

 

But nobody would have gotten this many GIRLS' replies like him:

 

@disturbed .. I agree ..

@angela .. Ur sentence can kinda create confusion ..

 

I liked the description of a love story...
wont relate that to anything or anyone

turns out
"Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, events, is entirely coincidental"
should be something i Always have to follow
i should tag that to my poems aswell

and oye! u should be regular here..
i'm not ordering you
..jus a request

Thanks!

 

^^^I thought of comin up wid a long reply .. but "Life seems to pass by way too quickly" .. so i'l jz give ya a :hug: