Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Nirvanafreak, Feb 21, 2005.

  1. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    Filled with anger,the pain is coming back,
    These feelings are like a strain around my neck,
    Dark clouds above me,should I follow them or not?
    Smoke in my face,my decisions mean a lot,
    I see crossroads and I don’t know the way,
    Standing in the middle,maybe I should stay,
    If I leave these crossroads,where will I arrive?
    And how will these crossroads affect my life?
    Now you’re standing next to me,your troubles are the same,
    I waited for you for all these years and finally you came,
    The crossroads brought us together and now we’re standing here,
    We’re making a decision,the decision that we fear...
  2. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    amazin lyrics dude , really nice one ,.,,

    nice title for the lyrics ,...
  3. rev

    rev New Member

    To escape the axe of a decision made
    realize one small thing,
    past errors and faults shall fade
    new ones shall come to sing.
  4. rev

    rev New Member

    Hi nirv, ur poem was good. I really like the style, don't you have a happier one? (Life is sad enough.)
  5. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    yeah , nice one rev , you really seem to enjoy this forum

    btw , nice valentine avatar ...
  6. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    hehe,glad you liked it rev,but happy lyrics aren't really my style ;)
  7. Mr. Scary

    Mr. Scary Bass-tard Child

  8. rockin'away

    rockin'away Banned

    mice one mate... read alot of ur poems.. they all good:)
  9. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    thanks again for these positive reactions :):

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