crossroads of life

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, Dec 31, 2005.

  1. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    hi... back wid another poem... well... wrote thjis in like 5 mins cause i juyst felt like riting something... hehe... don't like it much though :eek:: here goes...


    --> crossroads of life


    here i stand
    at the crossroads of life
    one road leads to freedom
    the other to happiness
    i stand still
    preplexed

    i try taking atep
    but am worried to make a mistake
    don't wanna regret
    i stand still
    baffled

    i wait for someone else to lead
    lead me to the rite path
    but there's no hope
    i stand still
    bemused

    i wait
    with my fingures crossed
    i wait for a lifetime
    bewildered
    i still wait...

    thanks for reading........ and now tell me wat u think... be honest plzzzz :eek::
     
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  2. har1s

    har1s <b>Untitled</b>

    hmm..really nice structure...liked it alot.. :) ... keep it up!
     
  3. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs &amp; Pasta

    Nice poem!!! I liked it.
     
  4. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    @ har1s & shsnawada.... thanks both of u... thanks a LOT! :)
     
  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    good work hira!

    reps :)
     
  6. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    hmm good work...

    even pakistani gals r also A- Addicted .. :shock: Hira...
     
  7. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    @ cryptic & vishwa... thanks :)
     
  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :) goooood to c u bk Hira,,,,,& nice poem tooo. Missed u on IGT buddy...hope this time u r bk forever :grin:
    btw, wat did u do wid ur avtar :eek:: ??
     
  9. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    @ garima........ thanks a LOt..... was looking forward to ur comment... thanks again.... well... my avatar.... mmmmm..... i thought of a change! :eek::
     

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