Crime= consideration

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, Apr 2, 2006.

  1. #iR@


    Hello ppl…. Me back wid another poem… but this time its something that I have deeply felt and something that MANY of u might not agree too but then again everyone has their own thoughts… anyway… just faced a real part of life and rote about it & a friend (K*** **** *** **** HO!) helped me wid some thoughtS! thx! :) Eagerly looking forward to ur comments… Hope u guys like it! And yea it is longer than wat I usually rite… but here goes….

     Crime= consideration

    I know I care
    More than u can ever dare
    But today I know
    It’s just not fair

    No matter how much I care
    No matter what I do
    U will never understand
    My principle and rules

    Whatever I do
    I am the one who suffers
    I know I have to change
    Cause its all proven today

    U showed how much u all care
    Even when u know I did whatever I could
    But then again
    Its just me
    Who has gone astray

    Being sweet in this world
    Is the biggest crime
    A crime u r never forgiven for
    U just have to suffer everyday!

    I finally give up who I am
    And turn into the zombie u all r
    I just hope everything turns out great
    Cause I can’t take no more tricks and games

    I wanna be happy
    No matter what it takes
    Cause I have just faced tears
    In this unjust race (life)

    I thought being urself was the best thing
    But now I know that’s not true
    U just can’t do anything
    No matter what u do

    I just give up
    Ready to change myself
    And trade my own soul
    For something that’s not pure

    I know I care
    More than u can ever dare
    But today I know
    Its just NOT FAIR!

    THX A LOT PPL... do comment on it! :cool:
  2. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    good one...but i dont agree to that line..neva change urself for the heck of others.....
  3. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    hi hira,

    i t hink i have an idea what u r talking abthere.

    gud u have written u heart out here.
  4. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    one of your nice poems...nice title,but something is missing,..that feel you get after reading such a poem...get what i am trying to say?..anyways it only my opinion...keep writing!!:)
  5. #iR@


    @ abhi... thx fro reading man! :)

    @ pamposh... thx man.... no worries waisay... i am back to normal! hehe

    @ hardik.... COMMENTS always welcomed as i say! :nw: thx man! yea... i agree wid u know after reading it again.... :eek::
  6. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo u mentioned...hv been thru this too...but decided to remain the way I am...cos "difficulties r intended to mk u better and not bitter"....
    stay :cool:
  7. sukanya

    sukanya New Member

    good work

    hi abhimanjrekar, if you wrote this stuff urself then its really cool
  8. #iR@


    @ garima.... thx gurl... and yea i wanna remain the way i am! :)

    @ sukanya... hhmmmm.... likha mein nay hai and all credit to abhi! :mad: hehe... np man i know it must have been a mistake or something! :p: thx anyway... comments r always welcomed! :)
  9. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    haha....its not me...i pass on the credit to the original one....
  10. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    great hira...
  11. #iR@


    @ nimisha... thx! :)

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