Hello ppl…. Me back wid another poem… but this time its something that I have deeply felt and something that MANY of u might not agree too but then again everyone has their own thoughts… anyway… just faced a real part of life and rote about it & a friend (K*** **** *** **** HO!) helped me wid some thoughtS! thx! Eagerly looking forward to ur comments… Hope u guys like it! And yea it is longer than wat I usually rite… but here goes…. Crime= consideration I know I care More than u can ever dare But today I know It’s just not fair No matter how much I care No matter what I do U will never understand My principle and rules Whatever I do I am the one who suffers I know I have to change Cause its all proven today U showed how much u all care Even when u know I did whatever I could But then again Its just me Who has gone astray Being sweet in this world Is the biggest crime A crime u r never forgiven for U just have to suffer everyday! I finally give up who I am And turn into the zombie u all r I just hope everything turns out great Cause I can’t take no more tricks and games I wanna be happy No matter what it takes Cause I have just faced tears In this unjust race (life) I thought being urself was the best thing But now I know that’s not true U just can’t do anything No matter what u do I just give up Ready to change myself And trade my own soul For something that’s not pure I know I care More than u can ever dare But today I know Its just NOT FAIR! THX A LOT PPL... do comment on it!
one of your nice poems...nice title,but something is missing,..that feel you get after reading such a poem...get what i am trying to say?..anyways it only my opinion...keep writing!!
@ abhi... thx fro reading man! @ pamposh... thx man.... no worries waisay... i am back to normal! hehe @ hardik.... COMMENTS always welcomed as i say! :nw: thx man! yea... i agree wid u know after reading it again.... :
Hey...as u mentioned...hv been thru this too...but decided to remain the way I am...cos "difficulties r intended to mk u better and not bitter".... stay
@ garima.... thx gurl... and yea i wanna remain the way i am! @ sukanya... hhmmmm.... likha mein nay hai and all credit to abhi! hehe... np man i know it must have been a mistake or something! : thx anyway... comments r always welcomed!
