hey guys.. bk wid a new cover... waiting 4 comments n reps =P Thnx cya Song link: https://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=397504&songID=5380158
I wanted something longer. Also, I think you're not being accurate enough with the last 4 notes of the riff each time. That doesn't mean it wasn't good.
Work on your phrasing, and on your timing. I didn't hear many off notes, that was nice. (seeing as you've improvised) A little more clarity on the faster parts. I'm no cover purist, so good job.