Cover of teri yaad by JAL

Just chk my strumming.....and do tell me how was it.............plzzz..lotz of efforts have been done..thank u

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not good larsan
u still need to improve a lot
and u really need to practice ur ryhthm playing

 

intro is alright...after that the chorus is wrong then the rest is alright...overall 50-50...room for improvemet...

 

thxx for telling me....can u plzzzzz gimme the ryhthm of the chorus ppzzzzzzz anyone with vocals so i can know more better...never mind abt vocals plz gimme me

 

big evil bro i only give the recordings of those songs in which i m weak.....so ppl can help me out..... u can't say my strumming is bad....becoz......u didn't heard my those songs...in which i m perfect hope u understand.....if possibe try to give me the strumming only for the chorus parti think my point is very clear to u...so jus help me

 

plzzzzzzzz help me out

 

sure dude
wait

 

y en u will brother..i need soon