Okay once you're through reading it I'm pretty sure its a typical poem but yeah it was one of the first few poems I really liked making..Yeah its a poem though it has a rap-ish feeling to it.. Cornered You're walking down a street that seems to go downhill You laugh at the irony Coz so is your life You're kicking cans,cursing yourself blaming everyone, even your destiny. So you think you've seen it all been through it all when will you wake up to see your troubles are ever so small. You've been blinded by anger by frustration,desperation you're pointing fingers but you know you are the architect of your annihiliation. So turn around and walk that incline laugh at the irony Coz so will your life. If you want to be great it ain't gonna happen Unless you sweat You have to give it all to be the best. Stop the bickering renounce yourself this life is about you Even in your failure and your success. If you think you've been cornered thats life's way of telling you "Life ain't all candy, Eat or be devoured." Its your life, So turn your ship around break free from the shackles of defeat And never be afraid Of going downhill.
this is good the exact word will be...fair i onse wrote The Baba Death came close and he laughed on her cause he knew he had, what all was to be done she was terrified to notice that the man had followers exited to follow and preparing for the run ... leave it .... u culd have got more out of the same thought i.e the paradox.
very nice..!! title umm...in my opinion overall there is a positive tone so the title is becoming misleading..u can think of sumthin else..thats just a suggestion! im impressed! so very true lines :- reps
@madhuresh..well thank you..and yeah I got your point. @#ira...well thank you..good to know that. @vini..thanks for the reps again...about the "cornered" thing, well the poem was supposed to actually be based on "when you're cornered" kinda theme...so thats where I got the title from...Eventhough "when you're cornered" would be more appropriate, it would be too lenghty and too revealing... And reason 2 would be: If you think you've been CORNERED thats life's way of telling you "Life ain't all candy, Eat or be devoured." that was my favourite part of the poem. Again reps = thanx.
