Feels good to post poems here :dance: So here it is: Constellations Lonely night, Just me and the sky above, Lying on the rooftop Time was but a mere word then... I looked at those twinkling stars I didn't get why people found them fascinating.. Days,years,eons will go by.. but they'll still be there,twinkling... But years have gone by I'm not the person I used to be Maybe I've seen life from a bit closer I'm old and a lot wiser, to know how soon it'll all be over.. See I know time is not just a mere word, The cause of pain,the mighty healer,all combined.. And so is happiness,you can never have it at once, and the pursuit of happiness is still undefined.. So I look at the sky now on a pleasant night, And I think I've changed, Life is all about the big picture I guess made up of happiness and depressions.. I've seen enough to know that, Coz I see stars no more,just constellations..
good usage of the word constillation...pata ahi ye yeats ka style tha ek word se puri gamut of feelings ko represent karna....i liked it !
Ok...well I didn't realize until you just said it..the whole "ek word se gamut of feelings"...don't know Yeats..I mean I never read his (or anyone's)work..thanks a lot man.
dude i hv always liked ur work.. but the best thing abt this poem is.. its something we all.. atleast me.. is going thru.. excellent pick of the word constellation.. on humor side.. when i read it 1st i thot.. constipation.. .. recently watched to awesome movies.. which left me thinking for a while.. 1) Pursuit of happiness 2) Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind.. watch them..
Nice and simple.. Not as great as some of your other poems, but I like it nonetheless! P.S. "not just a mere word" - Some redundancy there. You can't use both words in the same sentence like that, I'm sure.
Ohhhh thank you..that's a nice compliment I must say.. About the P.S....ohhh no you see I read the poem again to realize this...actually I refer to time as 'a mere word' at the beginning..hence,later, try to read it as time is not just 'a mere word' Other than that,I'm pretty sure I've seen this usage before,though I admit it is a bit ridiculous..
how cud have i NOT read this poem?! :shock: A-M-A-ZING! actually enjoyed reading it cause ummm... this poem reminded me of a moment wid ma friends... good poem man... oh and REPS FOR SURE! :dance:
lol...thank you!!!Ohhh reps..been so long since I got em..lol..thank you!! Ohh I know how you could have not read this poem....your long absence at IGT!!!!!!lol...now that you're here, post poems!!!
