Oh follower of evil,common sense of insanity, Oh bringer of love,reasonable lack of insecurity, Self-hate is what follows me,the purpose of existing, Love is not a part of me,except if it’s to you, I don’t know what to think about myself,I do know I despise me, I don’t even know if I already am what you’re expecting me to be, All I want is to be there for you and to control my self-hate, But self-hate is a part of me and I don’t know how to fight it, I want to help you,but can I help myself? Please be there for me,I’ll be there for you,too, I’ll be there in darker ages and brighten up your path, I want to bring you peace and lighten up your heart…
I liked it, but I think you used "self-hate" more than required in there. Try replacing it by something which implies the same, otherwise it gets a little messy. But still, this is good stuff. Keep writing!! P.S. What happened to the publishing?
