Conquering my self-hate

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Nirvanafreak, Mar 31, 2005.

  1. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    Oh follower of evil,common sense of insanity,
    Oh bringer of love,reasonable lack of insecurity,
    Self-hate is what follows me,the purpose of existing,
    Love is not a part of me,except if it’s to you,
    I don’t know what to think about myself,I do know I despise me,
    I don’t even know if I already am what you’re expecting me to be,
    All I want is to be there for you and to control my self-hate,
    But self-hate is a part of me and I don’t know how to fight it,
    I want to help you,but can I help myself?
    Please be there for me,I’ll be there for you,too,
    I’ll be there in darker ages and brighten up your path,
    I want to bring you peace and lighten up your heart…
  2. tejas

    tejas ..........

    I liked it, but I think you used "self-hate" more than required in there. Try replacing it by something which implies the same, otherwise it gets a little messy. But still, this is good stuff. Keep writing!!

    P.S. What happened to the publishing?

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