Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by browneyegurlie, Apr 8, 2005.

  1. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    I apologise for my madness,
    causing nothing but annoyance.
    Lost in a world seeking forgiveness,
    walking in circles again.

    The crystal rainbow,
    heals my wounds but the scars remain.
    There's a strand of hope thrown from the cloud
    but will it be cut before i reach the top?

    I feel happy,
    a sense of glow and warmth.
    The comfort lies in you,
    but my burning flame dare ask you a question?

    I thread the beads in my patience,
    in a glass house of wishful thinking,
    yet these dreams remain dreams,
    for the time being.
    light_of_erindi and Subhro like this.
  2. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Just excellent....

  3. Bristy

    Bristy ...

  4. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    wow :shock: reps
  5. light_of_erindi

    light_of_erindi New Member

    same house......nice one...
    I wud like to give u reps but i still can't figure out how to do that...:)
  6. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    click on da yellow smiley button (beside da red one) jus below ur sunsign.
    select "i approve" .. n click ok.. can post a comment too.. :) try it on me :grin:
    light_of_erindi likes this.
  7. light_of_erindi

    light_of_erindi New Member

    Thanx reps for u too for tellin me how to give reps.....:)

    RAKESH_GITS_FAN : <img src="

    good work ..........................................
  9. abhay_saxena

    abhay_saxena Lord of the strings

    that is great browneye .. . made my day .. came up on IGT after quite a long time , but your poem made my day really . Keep up the good work !!
  10. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    am borrowing these lyrix ...

    thanx ...
  11. shak

    shak Harrr!

    the best i had seen from you till now .. no kiddin
  12. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    you have my all appreciations....
  13. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    hey really nice...
  14. skaw

    skaw snooze

    very nice .. lets rate the thread .. :beer:
  15. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    good lines though brownie.i can get pick ups some ideas from this.
  16. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

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