this is my first post in this forum guys its a very nice poem hope u'll like it CONFESSION let me confess that there's a girl, more precious than a diamond or a pearl, a girl whose smile jus' makes my day, a girl who is beautiful in every way, and this is the vision i can see that she has been created only for me. this girl i tell u is always on mind, jus' can't stop thinking of her 'coz she's one of her kind, she's a part of me in all that i do, and all i wanna tell her... " i m crazy for u..."
nice one.....but the title is kinda weird..... have u done some crime or something?????why are u confessing?? is love a crime??? if it is....i (Was) guilty!:cry2: anyways yaar....me going to filmi....nice one.... reps for u uj:rock:
VERY VERY NICE ..Bahuut accha ..i am cursing my self ki i read it soooo late ..i will repp u and ...... u have a natural skill to rhyme, keep it up and never copy anything (though tahts tempting) ... very orignal
kya yaar now we will also have to hear songs from a teenager in love. But why not we all should good man ur nest poem should be about her dad and how he beat the crap out of you. lol nice poem keep writing these kiddo stuff
. yaar i guess he's confessing his love to us all here...right rickky? if not....answer the above quoted reply. nice poem dude... :beer: the thing is you have jus written my thoughts in a simple and lucid way..which were stuck and unable to come out of me : . next one...
