" confession"

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by rickkky_rich, Feb 3, 2006.

  1. rickkky_rich

    rickkky_rich Banned

    this is my first post in this forum
    guys its a very nice poem
    hope u'll like it

    let me confess that there's a girl,
    more precious than a diamond or a pearl,
    a girl whose smile jus' makes my day,
    a girl who is beautiful in every way,
    and this is the vision i can see
    that she has been created only for me.
    this girl i tell u is always on mind,
    jus' can't stop thinking of her
    'coz she's one of her kind,
    she's a part of me in all that i do,
    and all i wanna tell her...
    " i m crazy for u..."
  2. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    ya u said it right.. its nice poem... write it to ur gf....
  3. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    This forum is full of lovey dovey stuffs is'nt it.. ???
  4. uj_6string

    uj_6string Nickelodean Addict :D

    nice one.....but the title is kinda weird.....
    have u done some crime or something?????why are u confessing??
    is love a crime???
    if it is....i (Was) guilty!:cry2:
    anyways yaar....me going to filmi....nice one....
    reps for u
  5. #iR@


    very sweeet.....
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    VERY VERY NICE ..Bahuut accha ..i am cursing my self ki i read it soooo late ..i will repp u and ...... u have a natural skill to rhyme, keep it up and never copy anything (though tahts tempting) ... very orignal
  7. uj_6string

    uj_6string Nickelodean Addict :D

    and lovey dovey couples too:grin:
  8. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    kya yaar now we will also have to hear songs from a teenager in love. But why not we all should good man
    ur nest poem should be about her dad and how he beat the crap out of you. lol
    nice poem keep writing these kiddo stuff
  9. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    ^^ u talking about UJ_string & uj_sen ??
  10. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    :RollLol: :RollLol:
  11. slash_i_m

    slash_i_m Laid to Rest

    hehe rite.:RollLol:
  12. rickkky_rich

    rickkky_rich Banned

    tnnx a lot for ur regards!!! i'll bring up the nex one soon!!
  13. Petunia

    Petunia terminally dorky

    lovey dovey sure...but reps for you, dude!!
    its great.
  14. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Hark, the emotional delusional speaks :grin:
  15. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member


    yaar i guess he's confessing his love to us all here...right rickky? if not....answer the above quoted reply.

    nice poem dude... :beer:
    the thing is you have jus written my thoughts in a simple and lucid way..which were stuck and unable to come out of me :mad: :p: .

    next one...
  16. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    its a cutely lovely poem :)
  17. rickkky_rich

    rickkky_rich Banned

    i never expected u people are gonna like this poem this much .... i m overwhelmed!!!
  18. uj_6string

    uj_6string Nickelodean Addict :D

    no...i am talking about U AND KNIGHT KI GF...salla...:mad::mad::mad::mad::mad:

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