composition of fewlines of poetry...PHIR BHI NA HOGAA..by nimishaa

hi,

posting the track composition of few lines..of poetry posted by nimishaa.. titled as phir bhi na hogaa...in poetry and lyrics forum......

last stanza are composed...........lut chuke hai rang saare


a bit rusty may be.....and i need comment too..i will be happy in your criticism too


rohit
astroguru26

the link is https://www.soundclick.com/starguru26......

 

composition is good rohit...
ur guitaring n voice r great...
but some of my words..needs to be changed to fit into tune..
like.. maatam shud be replaced by gum..

i feel..this song shud have been a bit slow..n wit sad voice.. after all..it was a sad song...

these r just few modifications i wud like.. the rest of the work is awesome..

i know how difficult the job is..to create something wit originality...
u got full marks for that originality...
after all IGT has atleast few people who prefers to be creative....doing something new..!!
my best wishes for you.. :beer: