composition of fewlines of poetry...PHIR BHI NA nimishaa

Discussion in 'IGT Soundtrack - Your Band, Your Gig, Your Music' started by astroguru26, Feb 5, 2006.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member


    posting the track composition of few lines..of poetry posted by nimishaa.. titled as phir bhi na poetry and lyrics forum......

    last stanza are composed...........lut chuke hai rang saare

    a bit rusty may be.....and i need comment too..i will be happy in your criticism too


    the link is
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  2. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    composition is good rohit...
    ur guitaring n voice r great...
    but some of my words..needs to be changed to fit into tune..
    like.. maatam shud be replaced by gum..

    i feel..this song shud have been a bit slow..n wit sad voice.. after was a sad song...

    these r just few modifications i wud like.. the rest of the work is awesome..

    i know how difficult the job create something wit originality...
    u got full marks for that originality...
    after all IGT has atleast few people who prefers to be creative....doing something new..!!
    my best wishes for you.. :beer:

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