choti choti lines

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Feb 15, 2006.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    this was a innovative 1 so i am sharing it..

    tujhko bhulane ko hum ne
    kayi cigreet jala daali...
    kambahkt dhunnyain ne bhi
    teri tasveer bana dali...

    Tu pyaar kare ya phir na kare
    hum pyaar ki reet nibhayenge...
    tu nahi pat-ti to nahi pat-ti
    teri chooti behan patayenge...

    will add some more...kisi aur pe bhi ho to add karo yaar
  2. peaceful_words

    peaceful_words New Member

    nice one...quite funny....
    "tu nahi pat-ti to nahi pat-ti
    teri chooti behan patayenge..." lmao
  3. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    good one madhuresh....interesting stuff laga...keep continue this thread...
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    read only if u have a lot of time .............
    oxford of east
    this incident happned yesterday, its like we(my friend needed it badly) went for some ammonia printing 4 some fake documents, to a person near my place who owns a press (machine) suddenly in his room whre we were discussing thigs i saw a degree very neatly framed and hanging on unpainted/dainted wall with these words Master of Arts ..English litrature..1976-77..Allahabad university...First class first...awarded to Mr.prabhat nagi ...(the same person) now i thought a person who has soomany fake documents would have made one 4 him self even ...but my doubt remained (allahabad uni was 1se called oxford of east)so i played ...

    me: "i though oxford can not be copied"
    old man: "when its in east, u learn it to copy for others" and he smiled
    me:felt a bit embarassed by his looks " So much fake makes u think twice"
    old man: "no only an orignal can make real copies"
    old man:"connisure i am helping IIM aspriants" and we all had a laugh...
    later i came to know he owned the press and was the editor but things failed later..........some times i do thik how how HOW strange reality and perception r...bas another poetic incident and another orignal man..main ye incident bhool jata iss liye likha ...... i actually write the poems also the same way .... got the logic even if some one says its his i dont have any proof..his degree coud never be the proof of the man being a oxfordian
    world is run by orignal not real people
  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


  6. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    very well said.
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    phele soocha nahi, ab duri bhadhane se kyaa ho ga
    zakhm ghere hain to chupane se kyaa ho ga
    kagaz kalam khayaal sab le ke baithi ho
    baar baar likhne, mitane se kyaa ho ga....

    this is a long gazal but this one was a very thanda
    @kryptic.......that was good iiiiiii , if it woud have been voice chat...i would have used "eye" 4 "i" even .......sab pagal ho jate..1se i wrote i as a person who cant speak cause he dosent have a neck... and we like V symbolising two from top and one from bottom ...
  8. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    wah wah...
  9. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!


    did u get all this from that tiny book called choti choti baatien???
  10. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    @uj..pata nahi tu kyaa keh raha hai ??? is their any book called choti-choti bateen......i dont know ..koi nahi abhi jyaada nahi jhelna padega..main chala
  11. nimitr

    nimitr New Member

    "world is run by orignal not real people" ... liked this line .... well said madhuresh
  12. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    hume bhi batoo, razee-dil aye pari
    hansta huaa cheraaa, aur ankee bhari bahri
    jeene main kyaa, maza hai iss tarah se bhi
    gaheri gahari saanse dhadkan dari dari......

    now read this

    hume bhi batoo, razee-dil aye pari
    hansta huaa cheraaa, aur ankee bhari bahri
    jeene main kyaa maza hai, iss tarah se bhi
    gaheri gahari saanse dhadkan dari dari......

    now do u find any difference..their is in the 3rd line "kyaa, maza" ...if the comma comes after kyaa the poet asks and if it comes after kyaa maza hai, it means maza ..koi maza nahi..HAAHA ye kisi ne mujh se puucha tha ;when i told him that even a comma can chage the meaning of the whole poem...but couldnt give na example ..abhi Knight baba ki vazah se ban gayi..haha...main kamall admi hoon yaar...@madhu too good :-D..
  13. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    ^^^srry madhuresh
    cause that book also has similar stuff>
  14. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Wasnt this thread about one poem ?? :think:
    Yeh to bahut off topic chala gaya.. and that too by the thread maker himself :RollLol:
    Sahi hai... :)

    Psst psst madhuresh.... I liked this is run by orignal not real people... So simple yet holds a lot of depth !!
    Well done for coming up with this line !! :beer:
  15. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    choti choti lines wasn't the poem'
    it was the thread....well think so:grin:
  16. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    yaar where else can i dump these.....chooti chooti lines they r no good 4 a poem...and no good 4 a thought..just situationsek aaur lo

    ek bande ko hum ne maara
    to GF uss ki roo-di
    ye dhek paas aaya
    harpreet sigh modi
    kaan main aa ke bola
    kaash koi apni bhi hooti
    by-god do aur baari pitata
    gar aise utaane vaali hoti
  17. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    this is an observation..

    ghor kaluug hai yaroon, dekh ke hansi bhi aati hai
    yakeen to nahi hota par, stats yahi batati hai
    gar gore-chiite-smart hoto, mediocer hi paooge
    kyoonki sabse taka-tak bandi sabse, lallu banda phansati hai...;)
  18. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    on the thought that ppl have changed moods and r now rithgn different.....

    Thahaka, hansi, muskaan, ruuth jana aur sharmana
    kushiyaan jab aayi, har baar naya tarz hota hai....
    magar ye dard-ki-tanhaiyaan bhi, hain apne app main different
    kunki jab bhi "dard hota hai to bas dard hota hai"....

    tarz;meaning shade, style, expression
  19. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Pinky said no they dont, Rosy said may be
    so he went and asked an aunty, can little girls have baby
    "only happens after an ,age they attain"
    So this 6 yr old yells at them, lets play that game again
  20. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    i liked them...

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