chek ourz pehla nasha

hizz itz my cover after a long time...itz a beutiful song pehla nasha of movie jo jeeta wuhi sikander!!!!!!
Keoraf did da instrumental 4 mee n i did da vokalz !!!!!
waiting 4 u feedbakz
karez!!
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gyz reply tu kero !!!

 

Hey mubeen, i was just listening to your song and i think this isn't done very well man. Do not understand me wrong man, i don't want to hurt your feelings, but this song must be sung with passion and emotion ( dard bhari awaaz!), i don't hear that, you sung this real plain without any kind of feelings, just listen to the original song, you then will notice what i try to say!
The recording isn't very well too, the vocals are clipping in places.
I think you can do better!!

 

actuallee i recorded it wid a hed phone mic so datz y vokalz were klipping at some placez !!!!! yeh u r right !!!! i listened da oignal trac just tu memorize da lyricz !!!!