Chandni Raatein

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Babydoll, Feb 18, 2006.

  1. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Chandni raaton main
    tanhaeyo ke aalam main
    wo kuch aur yaad aata hai

    ye mausam ka takaza hai
    ya nasha hai uske pyar ka
    wo hawa ban ke badan ko chu ke
    ruh main utar jaata hai

    chand ko dekhti hu jab jab
    sharm si mujhko aati hai
    ye chand bhi ab to mujhe
    usi ka chehra dekhata hai

    ye taaro se bhara aasmaan
    aur bhi mujhe lubhata hai
    chnachal si dil ki aarzu oo
    ko andekha paigam de jata hai

    barish ki bunde jab mere
    tan ko bhigo ke jaati hai
    ek shararat bhari nazro se
    wo mujhe ched ke jaata hai

    shardi ki raaton mian jab jab
    neend se bezaar hoti hu
    wo chup ke se aake mujhe
    apne sine pe sula ke jaata hai

    behti hui ye nadiya
    mujhe ye kehti jati hai
    tu jiski deewani hai
    wo bhi tujhe chahta hai

    Chandni raato main
    wo kuch aur yaad aata hai
    chand banke wo
    mere dil main sama jata hai
     
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  2. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Gud lines...
    Keep it up!

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  3. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Thank u zoom
     
  4. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    wow...chand, taare, hawa, barish, shardi, nadiya sab ek hi sur mein tere pyar ko aawaz laga rahe hai....

    he will definitely come!:p:

    good work :cool:
     
  5. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member


    Ameen.. aap hamare haq main dua karde to shayad wo jald hi aa jaye :)

    Thnx
     
  6. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    ....from bottom of my heart...god bless you!!!
     
  7. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    *phew* amazingly romantic....meri taraf se bhi dua qabool kejiye...ham bhi dua karte hain ki wo jald se jald aapke pass aaye :):)

    Keep Smiling
     
  8. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Thnx Garima aapki dua ke liye aur mujhe sarahne k liye.. Shayd meri dua main koi kami rahi ho to wo aapki dua puri karde aur wo jald se jald aa jaye.. Ameen
     
  9. arpi

    arpi New Member

    wow kammo...I havent read this one before yaar too good .... hee hee....
     
  10. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Thnx sweetu :)
     
  11. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    late to read this...
    but dollie.... aap to bahot hi romantic hoti ja rahi hai...
     
  12. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    nostalgic moments................and romance ..........great work


    rohit
     
  13. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Dnt tell me nims ke tumne bhi nahi padhi thi ye ..

    Main toh pehle si hi romancti thi nims magar aaj kal to aap bhi kaafi chayi huwi hai huh.. :p:


    Thnx rohit
     
  14. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    wah wah. kya baat hain .. :rock:

    jab saamney woh aa jaayenge, kya jaaniye kya ho jaayega..

    lovely piece of wrtiting...
     
  15. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Sach na jane kya ho jayega...

    Thnx sachoo g
     
  16. arpi

    arpi New Member

    I read it again kammo....hee hee padhkar sharam aa gayi yaar...I'm blushing furiously LOLz ...cant believe you
     
  17. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    LOL arps :p:
     

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