Chandi jaisa roop hai tera sone jaise baal

Hi Guys,

I need ur help in deciding which one is sounding better and why. Yesterday I tried playing n singing an old gazal by Pankaj Udhas titled " chandi jaisa roop hai tera". I tried two diff styles (both subtle). In one style I played guitar a bit louder and in other one I let my vocals take the centerstage.

Song with fast/loud guitar
I found this song better as I was enjoying it which is evident from my voice. There is some energy in the song but the problem is.. none of my friends like this version.
https://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=448364&songID=5112529

Song with slow guitar
everybody liked this one but I find it dull...even while singing I was covered with thoughts like.... this song is going slow man.... enegery is missing man...what the hell am i singing....yaaaa.
https://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=448364&songID=5112547

just in case u face any problem with direct links click here (https://www.soundclick.com/ziblu) to go to my account n hear the first two songs.

So guys who can give me better experts comments than you all. pls dont mind the sound .. its kinda low..... u need to hear it in full volume ... i messed up the voice levels while recording.

thanks in advance for ur time n views
bhoot
https://www.ziblu.blogspot.com

 

Good job ziblu, liked both versions and yes i agree with you, in my opion the fast version sounds better too, i only would suggest to sing the song a little bit faster, not too much just a bit. It would be sound much better if you would play the solo aswell!
We used to play this song in our band aswell, its just a very good song and you did this very well man, my compliments!!!

 

Listened to the fast one....GOOD JOB......guitaring can be improved at certain points...but overall pretty nice job!

reps for u buddy!

 

thank you Keoraf and Ankur.... i kinda like the idea of playing a lil faster cause its slow..... will try it ..... thanks again

 

Both are good but it is apparent you are enjoying yourself with the fast guitar.I guess its pepping you up.My choice would be it.Keep posting.










Edit : And its chandi jaisa rang not roop.