Challenge to all Shayar

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by ajitmat_24, Feb 9, 2007.

  1. ajitmat_24

    ajitmat_24 New Member

    Many love story start with romance and end up in nightmare.

    Now lets start a game. First rules-
    1. The poem should be of 2 or 4 lines(HINDI or ENGLISH)
    2. The first or the second line(depending on the length of the poem) should be romantic.
    3.And the last lines should be something refering to disgust, anger, hatred blah.....

    Now for example

    Tumhara chera hai moti ke saman (Comon say WAH WAH)
    Tumhara chera hai moti ke saman
    Are yaar,
    Moti to mere kutte ka naam.

    How's that? Lets see the most romantic and unromantic shayar of IGT
  2. ajitmat_24

    ajitmat_24 New Member

    No one's interested in this????

    Let me post few-
    When I sleep I see only you
    Your hair are black and eyes blue
    But whatever i'm saying now is 100% true
    U are the ugliest girl i ever knew
  3. ajitmat_24

    ajitmat_24 New Member

    Now a common one-
    Door se dekha to
    Hema malini baal jhad rehi thi
    Paas akar dekha to Gae
    Poonch hila rahi thi:p:
  4. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    I love u
    I love u
    I hate u
    I hate u
  5. zicky5608

    zicky5608 Power Shortage

    As good as it gets...Whate Suthol man..!
  6. ajitmat_24

    ajitmat_24 New Member

    Notty lad ur really notty
  7. nazr

    nazr angel is my genital..

    ^I love your siggy. Reminds me of my kindergarden days.
  8. WildRose

    WildRose New Member

    here's something i composed right now :p --

    Its time to say those 3 words to you
    Hard to tell ya, but its really true
    I am all shy and out of the blue ;)
    O how do I say, that I hate you :p
  9. ajitmat_24

    ajitmat_24 New Member

    Cool wild rose. Loved it.
  10. ajitmat_24

    ajitmat_24 New Member

    Now chech this out

    When I see ur eyes
    I see deepblue skies
    But When i see ur red lips
    I feel to spit on it :p:
  11. nils

    nils New Member

    Lovely, beautiful , and my only wife,
    Marrying you, screwed up my life...

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